Tower of God: Gamer System

Author I'm going to be completely honest with you. The reason I'm reading this story is due to the fact that there aren't many tower of god stories that are that good and yours is one of them that is good. However there are many areas of improvement. For one, there's the writing itself. Maybe it's due to other stories that I've read but this story has very little 'meat' so to speak. paragraphs are pretty short and the OC's thoughts are little 2 dimensional. However again that does not mean the story isn't bad by any means. it could just use some work. There are a couple of mispelling here and there but my brain automatically corrects it due to past history with other works. The interactions are a bit dry but that's to be expected from a 'assassin' or 'hitman'. you most likely made it that way to save yourself time in updating the story. some more backround on the character would be nice too as to help us understand the character more. I very much like the update speed and I do hope that you can continue this story to the best of your abilities. That is it for my review and I hope you have a wonderful day

It’s pretty boring since all he’s done is follow Baam around like some dog…

Its pretty good but i dont like the fact that they used a sharingan. Arguably not that good in tog as the powerscaling is kinda weird as baam is somehow arguably planetary as a low ranked irregular. Its goodbut sharingan is overused

I would have like if he was your typical reincarnator with memories about the world, anysway this is my opinion on this novel. Thnx author

As always try reading it and form you own opinion but this is mine. While the story in it self is good, but there are some severe inconsistencies with the character and his way of thinking. While coming to the world of ToG and knowing nothing of the plot which is fine, but then saying he still has his old skills (Dagger skills, Tactical thinking etc) He chooses his class like a true idiot, choosing to be a warrior. Which is forgivable but then choosing a weapon so far from his original skill is moronic. Him choosing Warrior and Great-sword is like going against every advantage he has, and plus his Gamer system is nerfed.

This is my honest review on the book.1) The writing quality is bad, a lot of errors here and there. I don't know if your main language isn't English, that's fine but just use grammerly or any translation app. 2) Story development is mid because it still follow the same pattern and too much drama on unnecessary things like when Yuri asked Headon where bam and zero were going knowing fully well that it's the second floor since she was once a regular. That and others were a put off for me TBH.3) Character design I gave him 2stars to be generous because he's very stupid, an Assassin giving the chance to have 3 wishes because he's going to another world that he doesn't know and what did he do he gave the wish to rob to make it for him😭. Bro made this hit hard for me. A normal human would want to be jacked to the teeth but all he got was a sharingan, telekinesis, the gaming system idea was good but the rewards were just too low. like the crown game quest which the rewards were so low as he's putting his life on the line there are many more decision he made that made me think how was he an Assassin 😂😭 and why was the system grading his intelligence 12 😭.4) Updating stability: The update is consistent for me, and that's the only redeeming thing about the novel since all TOG ff author drop the books soon after.World background: Just gave you 3 stars because you are doing your best to write this novel since we readers are shy to do ours😂😂😂😂😂

Cerita yang membosankan. Pertama dari sifat MC itu seperti orang bodoh, dan sistem gamer sangat lemah sekali setiap dia naik level atau melakukan misi dari sistem MC akan diberikan hadiah yang sangat sedikit, aku baru pertama kali melihat sistem the gamer yang sangat lemah sekali. Setidaknya berikan si MC keterampilan AMATI untuk melihat informasi apapun agar tidak kelihat bodoh

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Not much make sense, the power and the with of the reincarnator are stupid and uncompatible.

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