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The Skill Extractor in OnePiece

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What is The Skill Extractor in OnePiece

Leia o romance The Skill Extractor in OnePiece escrito pelo autor X_x_INFINITY_x_X publicado no WebNovel. Note the main cover isn't mine.If the person who reads this fanfic thinks starting is ridiculous or at least the starting is worst well I can't do anything about it. NOTE: Read at least till chapter 8...

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Note the main cover isn't mine. If the person who reads this fanfic thinks starting is ridiculous or at least the starting is worst well I can't do anything about it. NOTE: Read at least till chapter 8 and NO, MC has his journey. If my grammar is bad then please I am sorry I can't live up to your expectations, I am writing this for fun and to improve my writing skills not to hear your negative reviews. ( I will take your honest reviews about my grammar and if you want to talk about the story plot and character development then please just go and reach the abyss by digging with a toothpick )

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ซ่งชิงชุน ผู้สื่อข่าวสาวได้รับข่าวร้ายเมื่อธุรกิจครอบครัวใกล้ล้มละลาย ทางเดียวที่จะกอบกู้กิจการคืนมาได้ คือขอร้องให้ ซูจือเนี่ยน ประธานบริษัทหนุ่มผู้เย็นชาแต่เก่งกล้าเฉลียวฉลาด มาช่วยฟื้นฟู ทว่า... ชายหนุ่มจะยอมรับข้อเสนอก็ต่อเมื่อ... เธอต้องมาอยู่บ้านเขาเป็นเวลาหนึ่งร้อยวัน! หญิงสาวแสนอับจนหมดหนทาง แต่ด้วยเห็นแก่อนาคตครอบครัว จึงจำยอมตกปากรับคำ เพราะเหตุจวนตัวจึงได้มาอยู่ร่วมชายคากับชายผู้เคยทำผิดมหันต์ต่อเธอ แต่ทำไมหัวใจจึงหวามไหวไปกับเขา ซ่งชิงชุน “คุณคือคนคนนั้น...ที่คอยปกป้องฉันใช่ไหม” ซูจือเนี่ยน “ไม่... ไม่ใช่หรอก” เขาฝืนใจโกหกไป ... อดีตรักอันหอมหวาน กลับต้องทนร้าวรานมาจนทุกวันนี้ เพราะความผิดบาปที่เขาเผลอพลั้งกระทำต่อ ‘คนในความทรงจำ’ ที่เขารักตั้งแต่แรกพบ จะให้เขาเอ่ยปากว่า ‘รัก’ ได้อย่างไร

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Roktah
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grammar needs work,too many mistakes , its readable though. story: i lost interst when he got 14 wishes, does "story development" still matter at this point, if he cant become a god in 1 month with 14 wishes than this story is bad for a different reason. character: have not read far enough for that, but the impression of the mc is "meh" fine i guess. world: "meh" but apparently he doesn't join luffy which gives me hope that he actually explores it in a different way than luffy. and since detailed knowledge of op is gone he wont join either. overall impression of this story 3/10 5/10 would be an average story, decent in grammar and story development, likeable mc ect. this story isn't quite there yet.

BobboLobbo
BobboLobboLv4BobboLobbo

[Plot lvl. 1/10] [Grammer lvl. 2/10] [Story Development lvl. 3/10] Overall - [Story lvl. 2/10] Not recommended for new readers. .... ... .. .

AllSeeingBedroom
AllSeeingBedroomLv4AllSeeingBedroom

SPOILERS: Things that made me turn away from this 1. The explanation where the MC body is what would come about when madara, hashirama and a rando uzumaki F*cked and had a child. 2. Chakra in One piece 3. Cringe "Mc name is one" 4. Another one of those Mc who is a straw-hat/luffy's dog 5. Grammarly being free but still unused.

colettes
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i lose when he got 14wishes. . . . . .

ZoneTail
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

Bad for: 14 wishes. ???? Story canon. MC secondary character. MC very stupid Grammar 2/1 ,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/

Eggcellent
EggcellentLv3Eggcellent

Sorry but stories where you get wishes is a bit stupid... But keep writing, who knows, perhaps it will get better Good luck blablablblablalball

KaiserK
KaiserKLv1KaiserK

bro so far so good, at first I thought it would look like another novel that has a naruto system in the onepiece, but it doesn’t show much of the naruto world, but it’s not so focused, it’s well divided between shinobe techniques, the art of the sword and everything else, I thought it was also nice that he didn’t join the straw hats because if he joined there wouldn’t be any logic since he is much stronger than any 1 of the pack he should be almost at the level of admiral, the grammar is a little confusing sometimes but nothing too serious (if you can put the level of potecina he represents as a novice vici-admiral, senior vici-admiral, or captain yonko, it would be cool, and continue with the story because it is a very of the best so far of one piece with things from other worlds)

SupremadaRevolta
SupremadaRevoltaLv4SupremadaRevolta

Qualidade de escrita............... ☆☆☆☆☆ - não realmente 5 ☆, mas darei 5 ☆ ▪︎Desenvolvimento da história........ ☆☆☆☆☆ - até aí tudo bem, não entrar no luffy é uma boa decisão, tnx para não nurfing o mc. 5 ☆ sem harém bs. Por enquanto nenhum romance bem feito. ( chega de mc do mestre pokemon) ▪︎Design de personagens........... ☆☆☆☆☆ - uma boa mistura de personagens. Uchiha Madara, Hashirama e Reinhard. Excelente. Mas, porque não está usando a habilidade de hashirama? (regeneração e elemento madeira). Ou você está planejando usá-lo no futuro, hmmm. ▪︎Atualizando a estabilidade.......... ☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Plano de fundo......... ☆☆☆☆☆

Skyzoo
SkyzooLv1Skyzoo

Penulisan cukup bagus namun kurang nya dalam percakapanya ...... .. .. ....... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawaaaa .mc kurang kuat tambahin om .....

Ailzonius
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