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The king most obeyed

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Leia o romance The king most obeyed escrito pelo autor Kylle_Manza publicado no WebNovel. jake and his family moved in a certain island to escape on a dangerous organisation that his father involved with. few months after moving he noticed that something wierd in the island. While walking ...

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jake and his family moved in a certain island to escape on a dangerous organisation that his father involved with. few months after moving he noticed that something wierd in the island. While walking home he heard some kind of noise not far from school he go to take a look out of curiosity and that time he witness an fight between nonhuman or super human battle. While standing in shock a heavily injured man grab his right hand. week later he discovered awakened to his body and there's a tattoo of king chess piece in his right palm day pass he discovered that he is not the only one that have an strange power like him and he also discovered that he is the current king the holder of king chess piece there's 4 total city in the island and the owner of every city are chess pieces/cube/dice/card every city have there king and if someone gather all of the king pieces can make any wish and it will come true

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James_D_Guzman
James_D_GuzmanLv1James_D_Guzman

okay the story is sure interesting... there some mistake on it so i hope you can fix it in the future also the other characters i hope they show up soon im pretty excited about it

Crackgear
CrackgearLv10Crackgear

From just a speck of notice of the first chapter, I had a little bit of a cringe. The writing quality is pretty mediocre but even if thats the flaw, the story is quite good. A proper and stable occurence in the storie's progression. Writing quality though, still is a little lacklustre. Especially when it comes to examples of sentences that starts with 'GAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!' Story developement is pretty decent for now. Only having two chapters, it needs a littlemore detailingand expressive volume. The author may need to up an ante with his writing sentences with a bigger and longer time put in. Character design is good but rather stereotypic and a little nonsensical here and there, still an ******* writer may or may not need to practice more but still an A for effort. Continue writing and as you get older, you realise your mistakes here and there. World background is a little dark for now since it only has two chapters for now. Continue practicing lad/lass. You can get better! Keep up the good work!

Kylle_Manza
Kylle_ManzaAutorKylle_Manza

hmmm first of all i hope you guys enjoy my novel and if you guys noticed there's some mistake on it jm bot that good in English i hope you understand it thats it leave a review and enjoy

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