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Rise of The Forsaken Ones

Autor: RandomRohtua
Eastern Fantasy
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What is Rise of The Forsaken Ones

Leia o romance Rise of The Forsaken Ones escrito pelo autor RandomRohtua publicado no WebNovel. (This is my entry into WPC#170 so if you like the direction of the story and/or find it interesting and would be willing to continue reading please use some power stones on it, the more I receive the ...

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(This is my entry into WPC#170 so if you like the direction of the story and/or find it interesting and would be willing to continue reading please use some power stones on it, the more I receive the more chapters I'll mass release) King lived most of his life alone in his orphanage but as he got older and found his first and maybe only love of his life Gaming it changed his trajectory at that very moment, what was previously a monotonous journey of school and helping around the orphanage turned into An adventure no one would believe unless they were there to experience it from Lone orphan to Peak Gaming Pro to One of the Greatest Cultivators of his Era become part of that remarkable journey today you won't regret it. Although it is my first webnovel i have a bit of writing experience in the past so bare with me as I shake off the rust along our journey together. Now on to the content of the story it is a cultivation novel I would recommend reading the prologue before starting because a bit of it will tie into an overarching plot within the story (no spoilers from me but I promise it is a twist you won't expect but will definitely appreciate) don't want to say too much here but if you enjoy the genre I can confidently say you will enjoy the story. P.S bear with me on the initial few chapters i've worked on them quite a bit but if I don't release them I'll never know how it is received by others I am already a harsh critique but we all have different tastes and interpretations so constructive criticism is welcome but I emphasize constructive there. P.S.S i don't own the cover art if it is yours please contact me to take it down I will soon have my own if you guys enjoy my novel as much as i enjoy writing it

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I'm gonna be honest here. I don't mean any disrespect to the other. The writing quality is good. There's nothing wrong with the stability of updates and the story development has a lot of deep meaning and long-term character maturity. It is not slow and written in the simplest form. I recommend for the editors to take this novel and adapt it. I'm sure the writer's quality content will improve. As a fellow contestant, I do believe this deserves the top 5 spot.

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The novel talks about King Johnson (which is a notable easy name to remember tbh) and his adventures following his transmigration to what appears to be another world altogether. Themes like transmigration, reincarnation to some degree and fantasy elements and worlds would be familiar for readers of this genre. THE GOOD - This is probably the first transmigration novel in a while that I've gotten to know about the protagonist beyond just 1 chapter. Most novels like this go way too fast in having the MC die and then transfer for a new body, but here, the author takes their time in giving us a glimpse at King, who he is, who were the people in his life, and what came to be prior to his transfer to a new body and world. - Chapters 1 and 2 have a good flow. Chapter 1 is a glimpse of King's unfortunate situation at prom night with his girlfriend Casey, then transitions to chapter 2 where they break up due to King's dedication (based on his speech) to venture into gaming, which disappoints her greatly. - Chapter 3 is unique because most novels that have the MC moving into a new body just go there, but here? King has a conversation with a supposed figure who would be the new body King would later inhabit (I believe) - Chapters 4-10 have a good amount of telling and showing world building elements. Idea wise I can see what this novel wishes to tackle on. In addition, King also has some interactivity with the world, allowing us the reader to paint the picture in essence: imagine everything through his eyes. He's very much aware of the world he's in, and that deserves a praise. What might need some rework Note: this part of the review is derived from the current state of chapters, and I do believe that the author is currently doing rework as of this review being written. - Chapters 1 and 2 have a good flow overall in terms of moving from one chapter to another. However, the telling of Casey and King first meeting including their relationship seem very fast paced, too fast for me to grasp their characteristics. Their dialogue, despite having a good amount of grammar, is equally fast paced in a seemingly rushed way. - While on the subject of Chapter 2, the fight scene between Derek and King after the former acted like a jerk to Casey? Unfortunately it was too fast. At only 2 paragraphs the fight scene blitzed past by me faster than a bullet train or even Sonic the Hedgehog on Redbull. I can understand the need to get straight to the point in the story, but a little bit more length into the fight including imagery (like how bad were the punches/kicks) and maybe some trashtalking dialogue in between would have been more of a "showing" scene of a fight. Same goes for the aftermath of the fight, what happened with witness accounts and Mother Olivia was too fast. I think it's best to make them longer with more dialogue. - While the reasoning behind King's breakup with Casey is logical, the overall execution is a bit awkward. Maybe it's just me, but I feel they were talking in an AI style of speech. There were words, but I didn't really sense the emotion. - Chapters 5-10: The content is good, but I feel there should be more showing than telling. Telling is good to summarize some things, but perhaps parts where King learns about the types of places in this world, it could have been shown via dialogue like the butler teaching him, or his parents teaching him. Conclusion: This is a novel with good ideas overall, from start to finish. Said ideas and structure is clear from King's life and his situation following his transmigration. However, many parts related to the world building have a lot of telling, and in some cases particularly the early chapters things are a bit to fast paced. I trust the author is doing their absolute best in order to make this story have the best reading experience for the audience. The ideas are there and the execution for the most part is fine, but it will be even better once you have all of the things I have mentioned worked out. What you're doing good: keep at it. What needs to be fixed in order to make it better: take your time on it. I look forward to reading this novel again when it has its edits and to see what else plays out for King and his journey.

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Although there are some grammatical erRor, the plot looks promIsing. the author should work on breaking some of the paragraphs For ease of reading for the readers. Other than thaT, keep up the good work! Please continue writing this awesome story! 😆

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Shamelss author Review back at it again ;) Honestly if you enjoy cultivation novels I believe you’ll enjoy mine there won’t be a lot of MC saves girl and earns ire of entire sect or MC spares his Opponent because the plot requires it if i had to Choose one word to describe the MC it would likely be pragmatic. I’m finally writing this after debating on doing it for so long and i’m using this WPC as motivation if you guys enjoy Reading this as much as i enjoy writing it i promise it’ll be an exhilirating ride to say the least.

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