Reborn as Naruto birth of a shadow

Pretty bad

Maybe write a synopsis so people know what the story is about..

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Imma be honest. This went from zero to one hundred real quick. Author you should put a warning for the heavy stuff at the beginning of your fanfic, tell us where it ends. Cause reading it made me real peeved. But other than the start which was real dark it was a fantastic read. Writing quality is decent, not perfect but not bad either. Story development is going good so far. Character design good, could put a bit more life on some of the side characters such as Inoichi's reaction to the MC doing it at 6 years old. Updating stability is a ok so far, writing at 37 chapters. It's Naruto, you should know its background but I will say this is far more realistic than Canon Naruto, though it's expected since it's AU. Also, author you should at least show us his status. The reason I clicked on this is due to system tag but it's practically faded into the background, can't really call this a Gamer fic because you don't really show much of it. I expected it to pick up when he started killing, maybe even get quests with him taking on missions, perhaps even unlocking an achievement fuction that rewards him depending on said achievement. All he's done on his mission warrants rewards in my opinion. Sorry for ranting

Excellent yes amazing job 👍yes 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏ah yes thats what im talking about yeah keep it up yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes

"With a SYSTEM" story. .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... ....

O protagonista sofre, sofre, sofre e perdoa, não vejo diferença entre ele e o naruto original, alem da memória, do sistema e a raposa nova. Não recomendo para quem não é masoquista.

who is the love interest btw 🤩💕🤩💕🤩💕🤩[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

Does the mc abuse the shadow clone training style in this novel? Or is it completely overlooked?

I have nothing to say. Next time try harder..