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Potter's luck

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What is Potter's luck

Leia o romance Potter's luck escrito pelo autor FanFictionForge publicado no WebNovel. Plot: When the last descendant of the Peverell family cries out for help, two beings answer his call: one is a legendary sorceress, and the other is the goddess of death, among tags: sex, immortality,...

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Plot: When the last descendant of the Peverell family cries out for help, two beings answer his call: one is a legendary sorceress, and the other is the goddess of death, among tags: sex, immortality, space, personification of death, relationship development, other planets, group sex, dystopian themes, alternate universe, imaginary beings, educational institutions, femslash elements. Advanced Chapters: pat reon.com/FanFictionPremium

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Parshwakripa_Jain
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I think you overdid it with Ron being so hostile I mean an 11 year old can't say stuff like that no matter what happens plus someone would have killed him already for saying stuff like that

BigNerdNasty
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Weird, random story changes. grammar is mid. no uniformity in story and background. hard to read.

DaoistqUzkLa
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I really liked this story at the beginning, but the more I read, the more I find plot holes, not to mention the fact that the protagonist makes choices that I don't understand at all, like when he gives the OK to Tom Riddle to enter his mind and show him his memories. It seems impossible to me that he is so foolish despite being raised by Hela and Morgana who are a goddess of death and a thousand-year-old witch.

kira2345
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There are fewer errors, thanks to the author))))))

GreyKnights
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i will give 2.4 stars this story needs a beta reader very bad

Viliam0203030
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great

kira125566
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Albinohashish
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Obviously a MTL. I can actively feel my brain cells dying while trying to read this.

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Thoughtfullnight
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the story is decent so far but i'm finding quit a few grammer mistakes or using the wrong word for example percy is head boy not head girl as is repeatidly stated, along with other such mixupes.

HalfazHipocrite
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The spelling and grammar are poor. Even copy pasta script is done wrong. The characters show very little to them. Ron’s name and nicknames are flipped and misspelled often enough to cause confusion. It just seems like a poor eastern face slapping fic with some god awful google translation errors. The headmaster might as well be a five year old saying nuh uh whenever someone disagrees. No cunning is represented by any characters at all.

Tony_Pecoraro
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I loved the book especially that you actually finished the book. Most authors don’t, they stop half way.

_LordRavenclaw
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I'm quit liking the story even though it's quit fast paced but i like the idea of smashing Dumbledore first. I quit hate him to bones. Also like you did it it in your work Alexander peverell novel It would be nice to first destroy his reputation

_LordRavenclaw
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