Overlord: Baldur Reincarnated

So this is my attempt at an Overlord fic. I have literally no writing experience, but I wanted to at least try because there aren't many Overlord fics that I truly enjoy, and the ones I do enjoy either quit or take ages to update. So, this is basically something I'll do while I wait for updates and such. English isn't my first language, so I'd appreciate constructive criticism. Oh, and do tell me if I get something wrong lore-wise with Overlord, etc. Without further ado, here is the synopsis: A young man named Sebastian dies, meets a ROB, gets three wishes, and reincarnates into the dystopian universe of Overlord 12 years before the server shutdown. He models his in-game character after Baldur, including everything that makes him unique—such as his curse from God of War, of which Sebastian was a huge fan. Later, in the new world, he realizes that immortality and not being able to feel anything aren’t as cool as he first thought. After this realization, Sebastian goes against Nazarick in hopes of finding a challenge big enough to make him feel something. I do hope I got the idea across with this synopsis. Some things might change, but that's it for now. And don't shy away from giving your ideas for the fic. I obviously don't own anything Overlord or GoW-related, and the cover isn't mine either. If the creator wants it taken down, just tell me. :)