One Piece : Throne War

Liked the idea of the story and think that it could have been great however I feel from up to the point ive read the author has made many poor decisions. Why im stoping now cause if it's like this now I can't imagine what it's like later. The thing im most upset about is his devil fruit choosing. I mean wind? How unoriginal, would have been way better if you give him a power that not every damn one piece fanfic has. Make the fruit his own if you get me ? If he had to eat one of the three there and then why tf did he go for wind ? Doesn't increase anything at all. Like there was blood fruit and myth. Why choose wind ? makes no sense. Also I dont see the point of the wishes he made? Strong body... why is he so weak then if his wish was for a strong body ??? Also his other wish.. to know everything in one piece. With this frankly how fcking boring of a wish.. whats the point of knowing everything in the world ? You know what gold rogers treasure is, you know where this gold island is, plus if he knows everything then why does he need a map? The only thing you have shown him using it is for fighting styles.. why couldn't he have just wished for a fighting style for himself then ? I mean I can kind of guess... your gonna use it later for your convince when he knows stuff that he's not meant to ? secret island etc to drag the story along

MC gathers crew member like stary adoption. first person he sees then become pussy . Like there are ton of people can become his crew but first time he sees some brat with emotionly angry momther complex. Gives him myth devil fruit **** like that. Then goes north blue to gather useless crew . He im sfrong i could protect you if you follow me ****. And all that crossover characters. Story itself become stupid.

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I thought this fanfic was good because of the rating but it wasnt not tbh those ****ty wishes that was useless and wind df??strong body? The most Boring OP fanfic ever

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Hard to read and follow. Very choppy writing and jumps from person to person without introductions and skips a lot. One minute they are going to a house next they are fighting on the seas. Good thought but too broken

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Great Fanfic. 5 out of 5 for alll the OP goodness. Though if you are a HOTD fan this fanfic will make you happy. Give it a try and it will blow your mind

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I love the idea of creating a faction other than the Marines the yonkos what the revolutionaries coast it's unique you know fanfic about one piece out there where makes his own faction. I want to see how the author build the faction

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