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One Piece: The Raging Shockwave

Autor: wahi55
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Leia o romance One Piece: The Raging Shockwave escrito pelo autor wahi55 publicado no WebNovel. In the forest, an old man appears carrying a boy with black hair and smiling black eyes."Grandfather, I've decided I won't become the Pirate King.""Hoho, Koutaro, you've finally come to your senses. I...

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In the forest, an old man appears carrying a boy with black hair and smiling black eyes. "Grandfather, I've decided I won't become the Pirate King." "Hoho, Koutaro, you've finally come to your senses. It seems throwing away sea monsters was the right decision." "Not only will I become the Pirate King, but I will also become the strongest man in the world."

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yasser55
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The beginning is good, not bad. If it continues like this, it won't be bad, but I don't know if you will film the fight scenes well, as this is the basis [img=update]

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wahi55Autorwahi55

Well author I will definitely give myself 5 stars[img=recommend] As I said your opinions matter to me whether criticism or praise Please don't be stingy with us

Error254
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Your first attempt was good, but there were some linguistic errors. I believe it wasn't bad, as it didn't lose the meaning, but it still lacks refinement. Please ensure you write the fight scenes well, especially with the translation; it might make them bad, and that's it 🥰

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