One Piece: The Conquest of Zoldyck

You di9d good with only one episode wish you would've continued because i felt like it would've been a good story. I like the whole didn't have an attachment to his family.

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This first part of the Review serves to boost my ego and continue the shameless tradition of this site. God, what a good Fanfic, the best thing you can read in your whole life, OMFG !!! With the ego increase, and the tradition finished, I continue; ---------- - Writing quality: I give myself a 3.5 / 4 as my English is not particularly good, I am still looking to improve, the biggest problem would be that I am a newbie at this. - Stability of Updates: I plan to have a 5 in this category but in the eyes of this site it would be a 2/3 because I do not plan to publish every day, even so, my chapters will have at least 5,000 words so it already counts as 5 on average - Development of the story: something that from my perspective should be judged individually, obviously I would like what I write - Character design: again it is something that is judged individually - Global Fund: This is something important as I do not plan to follow the canon, but this will be for you to judge.