Naruto: Itachi's Life (AU)

I have read this and i am very intrigued by the concept and want to rewrite the story with correct translation if you dont mind please allow me or contact me for proofreading. Thank you

While i like the concept the translation needs a lot of work so many mistakes like calling tobirama "eyre" or calling the mc feng in the first chapter when he's also called izune despite the fact naruto is Japanese making it very obvious which one is right you don't need to fully understand english to know that meaning the translator did not even bother to proof read his work.

Don't listen to all these mean reviews this obviously mtled translated,and if they don't like that they should just stop reading and leave no need to leave a bad review. I like how its going so far even with all the bad editing and mtl going on its still a good read at least to me! Besides people reading this shouldn't take it to seriously it's called fanfiction for a reason.

I mean there is still some minor mistakes and chapter 1 and 2 has more but it lot more better than reading it on mtlnl with some Chinese name and words. thanks and don't drop it. Thank you

I mean its really good but the Writing is literally a Chinese Novel type writing ............. .... . .

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Well, I don't worry too much about the translation since I read a lot of MTL and even if the novel is Chinese since most of the MTL novels I read are Chinese, so apart from all prejudice, this is a very good novel the central idea I like him very much. Keep up the good work on the translation, the bad thing is not making mistakes, but getting experience with them and improving.

TML but very op MC why Im gonna give so high score! //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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This is so scuffed. The grammar is awful and the names are screwed up. And yet.. And yet I'm still reading it :( Honestly if you don't mind losing a few brain cells per chapter like me you could enjoy it as well

I think its a good fan fic. with a great idea of using a system template from Bleach. Such storyline is really very unique. Good luck with the future storyline. Hope and wish for you to complete this novel...

premise is good but thinks it's on hiatus from what I could think ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Is this a Harem? .