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My Castle

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What is My Castle

Leia o romance My Castle escrito pelo autor Orange_Rain publicado no WebNovel. A poem about a king who was marveling at the castle he made himself when an 'acquaintance' arrives.Warning: Contains soft, minor tragedy.This is an entry for Writing Prompt Contest #63....

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A poem about a king who was marveling at the castle he made himself when an 'acquaintance' arrives. Warning: Contains soft, minor tragedy. This is an entry for Writing Prompt Contest #63.

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Adriano Gentala Abhiyaksa, seorang professor yang tegas di kampusnya, ia dikagumi dan ditakuti oleh para mahasiswanya. Dia bertemu dengan seorang gadis bernama Resyakila Citra Anantari di salah satu perjalanan tour untuk menghindari pernikahan kakaknya dengan mantan kekasihnya. Hingga pada suatu hari, Karina hanya lelah, ia tak bisa lagi menyembunyikan kekagumannya pada Aldric, meski direktur umum dari agensinya bekerja itu kabarnya suka berganti kekasih dan belum berminat untuk hubungan yang serius. Karina : "Aku tahu ini gila, tapi aku mencintai Anda." Aldric : "Kamu sadar apa yang kamu katakan??" Karina : "Ya saya sadar sepenuhnya!" Aldric : "Tapi kamu pacar adikku!" Karina : "Tapi saya tidak mencintai Adrian!" Aldric : "Kamu yakin?" Karina : "..." Sambil membuang muka. Aldric : " Baiklah jika kamu memaksa, tapi rahasiakan dari semua orang, demi karirmu!" ****** Sementara itu, Adriano memilih keluar dari rumah keluarga besarnya dan berdiri di kakinya sendiri demi kesehatan Ibunya tercinta. Citra : "Pak, ada yang mau saya sampaikan." Adriano : "Ada apa sepertinya sangat penting?" Citra : "Iya, ini sangat serius bagi ku!" Adriano : "Katakan saja, apa ada kendala dalam tugasmu?" Citra : Ini bukan seperti kedatangan saya sebelumnya ke kantor bapak, tapi...." Adriano : "Katakan saja, sebisa mungkin saya akan membantu mahasiswa saya!" Citra : "Pak Adrian, saya mencintai Anda!" Adriano : Membelalakkan mata dan seketika darah merayap turun dari kepalanya. Di sinilah kisah persahabatan mereka dimulai, antara sang Dosen dengan mahasiswinya yang cantik dan super absurd. Di sisi lain Karina mencarinya setelah merasa benar-benar kehilangan sahabat yang ternyata juga cintanya. Segala kisah yang mereka lalui bersama ternyata membawa mereka ke dalam kejadian-kejadian yang mengungkapkan fakta dibalik misteri yang melingkupi mereka. Asmara, ambisi hingga pembunuhan harus mereka hadapi dan selesaikan. Bagaimana kisah Adriano hingga dapat menemukan alasan yang tepat untuk menentukan kepada siapa cintanya akan berujung semua terangkum dalam "Cinta Pilihan : Professor Tampan"

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FATE AGAINST LOVE: HER DESTINY, HIS CURSE

Love is synonymous with holding on. You should never think of letting go for any reason but what if letting go becomes an option to prove how much you love someone? What if giving up becomes a sacrifice of love? Valerie Gonzalez finds herself caught in Fate's Web, as she fell in love with the same man, who in 4 different past lives, she had been in love with; a love that eventually led to her premature deaths. Daemon Vladamirovich wasn't just A MAN but a damned angel of the devil, a vampire who had hated humans until he met a soul; a soul he fell for and who became a curse he had to endure for centuries. What would happen to Valerie who falls hopelessly in love with a Vampire for the fifth time? Would she accept Fate's choice for her to be a curse to this Vampire? Would she flee or fight fate with her life? Can she dream of fighting the inevitable? EXCERPT "W-hat!?" Finding my voice again after a minute of silence, "That was another one of your weird jokes right?" A soft chuckle escaped my lips, my body's way of calming me. "I don't tell jokes." His face held no emotions and the words fell freely from his lips. "So how is it possible that we've met and fallen in love with each other four times in four hundred years?" I don't know if I was angry or hurt that he was using this nonsense to reject my feelings. If he was going to reject my heart, he should atleast have the decency of using a more cliche excuse and not this. "You believe in those superstitious nonsense about past life and reincarnation?" I wanted to scream but my voice betrayed me, as I heard the words come out in a quiet whisper. I was already fighting the tears that threatened to fall anytime soon. Why did I even fall for this annoying jerk in the first place. "They are superstitious... Yes, but they are not false." "So what you're saying in essence is that we've both been reborn five times now?" A string of tear which had let loose was immediately caught by my alert hand, as I stared into his eyes; eyes I couldn't even be angry at. "Not us, just you." "What about you then? How are you still existing after four hundred years plus?" "I still exist because I never died." "Who never dies in this life? And you don't even look like a four hundred years old grandpa." "That's because I'm Daemon Vladamirovich, a Vampire." The confidence and pride he exhudes saying these nonsense annoyed me more than the nonsenses themselves. "I don't believe you because I don't believe in Vampires or witches and the rest." I stood up from the bench and made to leave when his cold hand grabbed my wrist firmly but gently. "Would you like for me to prove it to you?" I heard his voice, a deep long sigh found its way out of my lungs, as I spared him another glance; he seemed too serious and confident about it all. "Prove what you're not? I'd like to see you..." The words got stuck in my throat as I saw two pairs of what should have been the incisors grow out, looking like razor sharp canines, my feet deciding, for my frozen brain, to take us away from whatever was in front of us.

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Hm, interesting. It's a rhythmic poem arranged in short line forms. At first I didn't really like the Bla blah's in parenthesis because I didn't see the fit or connection to the lines before and after them, but then I missed the parenthesis in the middle and liked its reappearance at the end. I also understood the blah blah as the news or chatter by the time the parentheses appeared again. I'm not typically a fan of these types of poems, but I liked how it ended. It took some time for the meaning to come across, but I had an image of a worker sweeping the halls, building the walls etc. rather than the king or queen building the castle. The poem had a bit of a rambling feel to it, like "busy busy as I work to build this castle don't mind others." I felt like it was trying to tell us something deeper in the middle, but I didn't quite catch it. While poems don't have to tell us something deeper, the momentum was lost somewhat in the middle and recovered by the end.

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