MY BOSS WANTS ME

This novel is sooo my type..the plot is so sexy. I love CEO and secretary novels, though some are a bit cliche I love them nonetheless for the story leading up to them seducing each other then ending up with each other ☺. I had high hopes for this novel because of the plot but the novel is kind of a major let down. The synopsis was a bit confusing but I understood the plot. Grammar, spelling, capitalization and use of punctuations are all very poor. Most paragraphs simply made no sense because of the multiple errors. The story lacked a proper flow and the author messily went from scene to the next. It seemed like the author was trying to pack multiple details and events in a single paragraph. I was also very confused about the point of view of the story. The author went from third person to Emma's first person then to Ethan's first person which very much confused me. I recommend that the author read over their work before publishing get grammarly or proofreader or get an editor to help them out. Overall, the plot is golden but the novel itself is in need of major improvements. I hope the author can work on their novel and only get better and better as they write. [img=recommend]

I cant say much since the chapters posted are still minimal.But so far so good. please give us more.i love the synopsis........ kuddos to you author

I am so elated, Since I am first to review. Okay so, First thing is I really loved the novel and story line. Start of story was simple yet engaging. This novel has great potential ahead. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!

First of, the synopsis is really intriguing. It is written well enough to let the readers anticipate. The plot is good, and the characters are well-written. It is intriguing to know what will happen to the relationship between Ethan and Emma. There were errors here and there but they could easily be fixed once the chapters were proofreaded. Overall, it's an amazing book!

I actually think this has potential. I added it to library! Your style is captivating and easy to read. I love the way you describe the scenes. I expect more of this hopefully it can be a total success!!

For the most part, this story has potential. The beginning really caught my attention and I hope that Emma will get to be happy soon. I think you just have to double check your work before posting your chapters so that you can sort out any grammatical and spelling errors.

The novel may start of slow but I assure you that it does get better and exciting along the way. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]