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Monsters Underneath

Autor: Crisp107
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What is Monsters Underneath

Leia o romance Monsters Underneath escrito pelo autor Crisp107 publicado no WebNovel. Two ordinary friends find themselves getting exactly what they wanted. Be careful what you wish for....

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Two ordinary friends find themselves getting exactly what they wanted. Be careful what you wish for.

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A man knelt in front of a fire. His shoulders hunched and dropping with exhaustion. Remnants of what may have once been armor hung off him. His skin was cracked and soot-covered and where the bare skin could be seen it glowed with the same intensity as the fire before him. A weapon lay beside him, a halberd. It was caked in ash and its shaft showed signs of breaking. Covered in so many little cracks that the wood looked fragmented. A bang sounded out sharply in what was once total silence except for the quiet crackling of the fire that he watched. The man raised his head looking over what was once a great hall. The stones were cracked and the furniture in the room had long ago been used to feed the flame. All that was left were the great doors that held them outside. Again it sounded the door shaking from the force of it. The man rose this time taking hold of his weapon of choice. Tiny pockets of flame rose upon his body. popping in and out of existence sporadically. He was tired so very tired. He was ready to give it all up he was the last after all. The banging continued getting louder and louder. The doors creaked and groaned under the stress of it when suddenly there was a cracking sound. The doors burst inwards sending splinters hurtling around the room. The man raised his arm to shield his eyes as the splinters flew at him. He lowered it quickly as to catch sight of the foe. It was a gnarled thing, an amalgamation of grey sickly skin and yellow push like eyes that covered its body. Its limbs had no hands or feet only blade-like bones that jutted out every so often. The creature and man rushed at each other battling with a vicious intensity. The man took blows but replied in kind lashing out with the halberd and whips of flame that came off of his body. The creature moved rapidly around the man looking for an opening when suddenly the man swung the halberd. It bit deeply into the creature's flesh and the man drove the fire around him up the haft of it and burned the creature to ash. He stumbled then and fell to his knees exhausted and wounded. He turned his head towards the fire and closed his eyes for what he thought would be the last time. Then he felt something, an overpowering warmth. His eyes flashed open and he saw the fire expand. It twisted and turned as it took the shape of a figure. It continued to change as it made its way out of the fire. Blury edges sharpened and formed a more complete image. A women made out of fire reached out towards him. Speaking words that could not be heard. As the man drooped into unconsciousness she smiled and that was the last.

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For a first chapter this was pretty solid it felt a little fast paced but overall I'm really looking forward to the future And so far I've enjoyed it.

Rosy_cookie143
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It's a really good rough draft for the first chapter! Few grammatical errors here and there but doesn't effect the story at all. Worldbuilding and character design/description could use a bit of work and it did feel a bit rushed for the plot twist and some minor repeats of events in different POVs that felt a little unnecessary. Overall i'm pretty hooked and i'm excited to see what happens next ^^

Mjrboi
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I see potential for an amazing story! While currently there isn’t a whole lot, the character and story development seems to be similar to that of a seasoned writer. While there are some minor grammatical errors, they don’t affect the story too much. Overall, I can’t wait to see where this goes!

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