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In danmachi as a vampire

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What is In danmachi as a vampire

Leia o romance In danmachi as a vampire escrito pelo autor Alexander_sama15 publicado no WebNovel. Alex wakes up in an unknown place, with no memory of who he is and where he is, but he knows something, he has a thirst, a lot, and nothing will stop him until he is satisfied, while he satiates his t...

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Alex wakes up in an unknown place, with no memory of who he is and where he is, but he knows something, he has a thirst, a lot, and nothing will stop him until he is satisfied, while he satiates his thirst he realizes a small and important detail... ================================== Read the auxiliary chapters pls

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omarvk_proLv3omarvk_pro

Well, as I said before, it has potential you just have to practice a little more with the pov, and follow in an orderly and explanatory way how you are doing it, and if you can update I'm not saying daily but almost daily would be better, but don't rush it you are doing fine.

Winter_Whisperer
Winter_WhispererLv4Winter_Whisperer

I like it, I truly do. but there are lots of mistakes and such it's difficult to immerse myself in the story. my advice is to get an editor or use Grammarly. hope u fix this since I really want to to enjoy this story.

OnizukaShinu
OnizukaShinuLv10OnizukaShinu

It has great potential yet the author blew it with his overused grammar and perspective changes. The mc’s dialogue was unrealistically obnoxious, heck, delirious. It’s plain and generic, I would understand the mistakes since you’re new. I reccomend you to not do those ”author’s pov” or “scene change” just stick to one perspective and other ways for scene change by all creative means, since it’s sickening. I hope you understand and have a good life.

MrHollow
MrHollowLv1MrHollow

I very much like the story. It does contain grammatical errors but it gets better so thank you to the author for trying. I wish you the best author

AmazeAngelo
AmazeAngeloLv4AmazeAngelo

The story was good and all why did you drop it

Daoist0ZvZFg
Daoist0ZvZFgLv3Daoist0ZvZFg

Long as flash back the you dropped it not even that good to confusing yeh that my take on it

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