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Immortal beast Ascension

Autor: HeartRend
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Leia o romance Immortal beast Ascension escrito pelo autor HeartRend publicado no WebNovel. In a small corner of the Tai Peng forest lay a clearing. Within, a small distortion of space deposited a petite form unto the ground.The creature, one not from this world, would aspire to survive and ...

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In a small corner of the Tai Peng forest lay a clearing. Within, a small distortion of space deposited a petite form unto the ground. The creature, one not from this world, would aspire to survive and find the truth about its circumstances. In this world where might makes right, how would the creature survive? Who will it meet on the way? And what is the secret hidden behind its existence? In the face of adversity, he would not surrender. Be it a mountain of bones or rivers of blood, nothing would stop it from protecting those close to it and realizing its goal.

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Author's subjective view: Writing quality: 5 stars. I think It's quality writing I have developed over years of study and practice. Gammer should be nearly perfect. Grammar Nazi's might find something if they are picky. Stability: 2 stars. Only two chapters, so I will see where the must takes me. But I know I am very busy with work, school and job-search so I won't be able to write every day, or even every few days. Mostly when I have time and the must strikes. I hope to create a story I enjoy writing so I actually want to come back and write, rather than find it a chore. Development and Design: 4 stars. This is what I hope to do. I want to take it a little slow in how I introduce things so I can flesh out characters, motives and sceneries. I want people to be able to visualize what they are reading rather than just get the point across. When reading myself, I always find the most enjoyment when a novel is immersive and I can picture what I am reading. I aspire to do that as well. Will take advice for improvement World Background 3.5 Stars. Not much done yet, but I hope to flesh it out. However, if I actually flesh it out a lot, I am going to get bored as I know the world I am envisioning is massive, so much so that I rather introduce the parts necessary rather than be too detailed at once. That will bore me, and you. In the end, I am a reader first and author second. But I hope to take criticism for improvement. Just don't bother me with grammatical errors because I believe there are very few and I am not going to bother fixing those for now.

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