Hidden Secret: Hidden ties between rivals.

Not sure what to say. That was an amazing start 😄, although romance isn't at all my favorite, I would say I like the Dynamic of relationship between brother and sister. The writing quality is good. Not much to criticize to be honest 🤷

Romance is not my favorite genre but this is good. Dialogues are good. The pacing is fine. Good read overall.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

I liked it, there is no sign of useless or more than enough descriptions which I like, secures a perfect writing style. Also realism is a thing I admire....Best Wishes!

Nice work, okay so I'm totally into Leo and Brlla's characters..they seem quite in a regular bond. The author describes their features in a very detailed description and it helps a reader to imagine them... Keep it up, author.

Nice book to read, love the character design and the plot, grammar and dialogues are nice but there's just one problem, too few chapters. I'd love for more chapters to be released.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story! Interesting characters and intriguing, and the unique aspects of the plot kept me engaged. I sincerely hope that you will continue to update this story, as I am eager to see where it goes from here. Great job, and keep up the good work!

I really like the way the author describes everything it is detailed but not unnecessary. Overall it is a nice book to read. Keep it up, author!

Y'know, I'm quite speechless about what to say. It's so freaking awesome. I started reading and I felt like I was right beside the characters. Keep up the great work. 👍 This book has great potential

Amazing. I like how you can picture Isabella's life from the detailed description given by the author. The story itself is beautiful. Great job, I look forward to more.

Based on the first three chapters, I think this book is an excellent read. The author has a way of pulling you into the story and making you feel like you are right there with the characters. The characters are well-developed, and the dialogue is engaging, making it easy to get lost in the story. Chapter 3, in particular, was exciting and left me eager to find out what will happen next. The author does a great job of setting up the tension between the "good side" and the "bad side," and I can't wait to see how this plays out. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a captivating read.

Not typically a fan of religious characters, but the main character seems pleasant thus far. The writing quality is solid, a good book if it's your cup of tea.

This was an entertaining read so far! The summary was hooking. Who doesn't love a good guy-falls-for-the-target? It's one of the most satisfying romance tropes out there. As for the content, I find it nice. The descriptions of the characters are good , to the point the readers will also find them sexy. Hehe It's less than 10 chapters in, but it's a good read so far! Kudos!

Okay, Here we are again, Another romance book, Seems interesting, Gonna say love Leo and brlla's connection, the pace of the novel is fine... And overall the story is simply great

It's the shameless Author rating herself 5 stars. I won't be updating regularly because of school work.

Engagaing characters and good writing, I can say that, as the writer described the features well. a romance story with interesting plot is quite interesting.

The development of the story has been good so far. Isabella's situation has intrigued me, I can't wait to discover her father's secret.

I like the characters so far and can't wait for some more characters. I really wanna see how this whole thing will unfold. Especially with the main character's father.

A very captivating start and very realistic as well! There are no unnecessary descriptions. Looking forward to more chapters in the future...

The story is written in a very simple and understandable way, since the story is still in its initial stage nothing much can be said but with I can say that it would indeed be a promising one. Although it would be better if not everything is described, if you do it in initial chapters then it's fine, but don't repeat it as it makes the story long and boring to read. Good luck author👍

Just read four chapters yet this story is so rich. I love how vivid the words used in the entire storytelling. This is something that I can see in a published book that's been meticulously put together by a pro. Looking forward for more chapters.