Going In Completely Blind

This is a good piece. I'm enjoying reading this. The protagonist is interesting, plot is going interesting as well. Great potential!

impressive writing skills, I felt like i was watching a movie. The fictional characters came alive. Good job Author, 👍👍

Oh la la! This is gorgeous and beautiful I am impressed,well written like a bro keep it up and great😉 I love it so much.... Masterpiece, art piece

Wow what is this shining light coming from this book, It's BEAUTIFUL!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥👏 I love it ❤️ You keep on shining 🌟 Fighting! ✊

A good read, the plot is solid I love the outline

Love the 4th wall breaking. Reminds me a lot of Deadpool .

The fanfic puts a whole different spin on the mostly disliked self insert fanfic. It combines quite a bit of fourth wall breaking, with 3 of the most recognizable 90s anime magical girls from the genre of the same name. And while some, if not most self-insert fanfics, feature the author using their knowledge of the show to make some mostly drastic changes to the show that the fanfic is based off of. While this fanfic, does the opposite, the self-insert has absolutely no knowledge of the anime canon timeline, and only has information regarding the anime characters of the show. Well worth reading the whole thing.

It’s a well written story with great world building and well crafted characters. I love that it’s fast paced and you put some thought into the story. It deserves a five star review. Good job.

I may not be familiar with the reference to the story but it is still a nice story itself. The interaction between the characters is fun to read and very lively, and the way it is written is simple and easy to understand. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.

As a first-time reader of fanfiction, I am pleasantly surprised by this. The plot is interesting and the way it’s described is eye-catching and doesn’t feel rushed. Will keep reading more.

It's an interesting story, a fascinating characterization with a detailed plot. From my view, this could be one of the potential stories in the future. Impressive, Author

This was a blast! The author does a great job of dropping the main character into the world of Wedding Peach, and it's a lot of fun to see them navigate the story alongside the original characters. One of the things that really stood out to me was the way the author plays with the idea of being a "self-insert" character. There are some great moments of fourth wall breaking that add a lot of humor and personality to the story. The writing is easy to follow, even if you're not super familiar with the Wedding Peach anime (although it's definitely more fun if you are!). The author does a great job of explaining the world and characters, so you can jump right in. What I really loved about this story is that it's not just a straightforward retelling of the anime. The author adds their own twists and surprises, and there are some really interesting themes and ideas that come up. I don't want to give too much away, but let's just say that it's not just a simple good vs. evil story. Overall, I'd definitely recommend this to fans of Wedding Peach or just anyone looking for a fun and lighthearted read. It's a great mashup of anime and fantasy elements, and the author's enthusiasm for the original material is infectious.

Your book is really nice author . I'm looking forward to more chapters from you please

Nice story, I think I'll take some pointers from it in the future. liked the development

I love the book. Nice work author keep it up !🙂🙂

First of all, the concept, too different and described which is eye-catching. Doesn't feel rushed and the 4th wall break made me wanna leave a review XD The MC's thought process is kinda chaotic I suppose.

I am new to fanfic but it was a really fun read. The plot settings and conversation between the protagonist and other characters are interesting, especially the fourth wall breaking chapter. How to greet someone politely? Hey pervert🤣. Well, that was what the author taught me (just kidding). It was worth a read. Keep it up author👌

I am absolutely enthralled by your story! The way you weave together complex characters, plot twists, and emotional depth is truly masterful. Your art style is stunning, and the pacing is impeccable. I find myself eagerly anticipating each new chapter, invested in the characters' journeys and the unfolding drama. Your passion and dedication shine through on every page. Keep sharing your incredible talent with the world – I'll be cheering you on every step of the way!"

This is a good novel. I also admire the fact that the author hasn't locked the chapters yet which makes us readers read more for free for a while. The story building is good, although I got confused at first. Story is also set in first person view so you won't have a hard time distinguishing the mc from the others when talking. Keep doing your best and work hard! Good job.

First Impression This story is relatable to my childhood anime shows. It is similar to that famous shoujo school girl sailor student anime shows. It is a fun read, I recommend this story if you are interested with the genre. In depth review I never thought that this story was a fanfic. The premise is way original and the way the story unfolds is different. Although there were elements I see which were similar to an anime I saw. I found this story standing out. The pacing was fine, not overwhelming and gives us time to digest what the story was all about. The character was relatable also, with the character's perks being likeable as well. Lastly, the writing quality is good. It's detailed and describes the scenes well. Closing I had fun reading this story. I see that the author is dedicated in writing. To the author, keep up your good work. There's a lot in store for you and this story.