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Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

This novel is currently on pause. It doesn't mean that is finished or that it will never see another chapter. Since it need a hard editing rework, I will now focus on my New Novel "My Demon Pet System", participating in WSA 2K21. I sincerely hope you loyal readers will show your support by voting it and helping it climb the rankings. I aspire to edit BoAP soon, letting you know more about Dag's adventures. _________________SYNOPSIS_________________ Millions of years in the future, the Sun collapsed, and the existence of the human race on Earth was about to end. Yet, the arrival of the Xis, an omnipotent alien race, saved the human from mass extinction and forced them to live under the surface of the airless, dying planet. Their act wasn't selfless though. The Xis forced the human race to atone for their sins against the Earth by sending them on a journey to explore their ancient bloodlines. They created an artificial solar system with a planet for each of the ancient pantheons, and divided the remains of the human race according to their ancestors. Dag, an earthling kid, is about to undergo the test of his bloodline through an alien machine called "Temporum". The Temporum would send him to the Viking planet, where he will discover an eerie connection with the ancient Gods and learn to wield part of their power. However, he will soon find out that his bloodline hides far more than that... 6 pantheons 6 destination planets A multitude of Gods and supernatural powers. One destiny to fulfill. P.S. This is my first novel. Comments and feedbacks are very welcome. I'm from Italy, so I'm constantly improving my writing skills. Good reading! ---------------------------------------- Weekly Milestone Goals: 800 Power Stones --> +1 Bonus Chapter 1K Power Stones --> +2 Bonus Chapters 2K Power Stones --> +3 Bonus Chapters ---------------------------------------- Support me on ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/immanioripse Join my Discord: https://discord.gg/XxGKwxX Instagram: @immanioripse_author Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Immanioripse-Author-101625858453333 Twitter: @immanioripse Cover credits: Cosmas

Building an Empire in Game of Thrones (REWORKED VERSION)

(REWORKED VERSION) This is a Rework of my previous story with some slight changes, improvement to the grammar, and improvement to the story overall. Some things will be the same of course and then some things will be different. ----- ----- Maximus was the son of the smartest and most powerful people in the world. His Mom and Dad being geniuses made advanced technology that boosted the world's development level but also caused more conflict. After his unfortunate death he is reincarnated in the world of Game of Thrones and granted a system to guide him along the way Follow Maximus as he tries and build an Empire in Game of thrones --- --- This Story will be faced paced and include Kingdom building and a Harem

I shall change the protagonists' fate.

Currently, this novel is unavailable. As a "beginner" author, I’ve spent the past four months improving my skills, and looking back, I find what I’ve written before to be, well... not great. Over the next month or so, I’ll be editing and reworking this book to make it better. Completed: 23 / 116 chapters.

DELETED, REWORKING

REWORK

This is not my own work; all credit goes to the real owners :Jason fried & David Heinemeier Hanson the chapters are not really long so just be patient

Merging Skills To Reach The Top

After thinking quite heavily during the break, I considered revamping it before continuation. I don't hate it's state, neither am I really satisfied with it at the moment. It's been on my mind since writing my last 10 chapters and I further confirmed the chaotic state of the start. What does it mean? The chapters will probably become longer with more style to them, but just those. After their rework I will come back with regular length uploads. --------------------- Growing up without Bloodline Mastery exposed piling up difficulties. Being at a high school for talented adventurers wasn't a great idea, but no other school could accept a no-name orphan. No, seriously. His name was Shay. Nothing more, nothing less. The school allowed him to at least study the way of the sword, in which he excelled. Although being geared after leaving school wouldn't make much for a living. It 'seemed' to be an inevitable path. [Merging System - Unlocked!] —————————————————— Thanks to Tsukiyu for helping me with the book cover! :)

REWORKED

After single-handedly dragging himself and his sister out of poverty, Calle was finally able to live and enjoy his life, having everything that he and his sister could ever want. However, what would happen if suddenly a god-like existence that had just saved his life told him that the world that he was currently living in was about to completely change? Strength will become the absolute ruler of the world and the weak wouldn't even have the privilege to have a will of their own. "But fret not, I will give you the strength to destroy those rules. The strong will bend their knees to you and the weak will worship you." The god-like existence said while looking at Calle straight in his eyes. Calle who had worked his blood and tears to make himself and his sister live a comfortable and joyful life, of course, refused to let his life be dictated by others and accepted the offer. But who would've known that the power that was given to him was the absolute power that all the rulers of the universe coveted. He was given the power to conquer dungeons and later call upon the monsters inside to do his bidding. He would raise his right hand and hundreds of monsters would raise their swords for him. His left hand soon followed and hundreds of beasts would bare their fangs against his enemies. His mouth would open and hundreds of gates would open as mythical creatures from the legends walked out and stood by his side and obeyed his command. Whenever he goes, his armies would be with him. Follow Calle's journey as he conquered dungeons and use them to fight against gods and higher existences alike as he became the strongest existence in the universe. ====== The start will be quite slow to get you to know more about the characters, but as the story progresses, the pace will pick itself up. And in my opinion, it will definitely be a story worthy of your time. ====== **Cover art is not mine, if you are the owner and want me to take it down, please contact me.

Accidentally summoned as a Dragon Lord(reworking on another platform)

Warning! MC has psychopathic tendencies and enjoys spilling blood. After being summoned with his class to another world, Drake finds out that the goddess did not bless him to be the hero. Therefore he was banished. However, in his dreams, a dragon shows up revealing that he is the reincarnation of an apocalyptic monster and a ruler of all dragons. He is a dark dragon. As the dragon lord, he will rise above all else and mercilessly burn those who stand in his way to ashes.

THE POISON DEITY

NOTICE__ This novel is currently on hold due to inadequate planning and numerous errors. The novel will be reworked in the future with a new title, revised character names, and numerous other changes. I will inform you all when I decide to resume writing, possibly in two months' time. Read my new book_ Assassin System: Rise of a nobody (I promise you won't be disappointed)

Rework

Ethan's life was already bad as it was. He was abandoned, abused, bullied and isolated by his classmates and then after all of this he died...just like that in a car accident and trust me, he wasn't happy about that so when he went back in time to when he was born his first thought was "ok...it's time to fuck them up" but why does this gangster boss keep chasing after him? Ethan: I'm sorry for bumping in you ok so stop chasing me!! Boss: No.. Ethan: Why?! Boss: Cuz your my wife.. Ethan: When did I marry you?!!!!! In fact this story is really sad and dark about two people from unfortunate pasts falling in love with one another. Warning: This is Bl, fujoshi/fudanshi, etc. The cover isn't mine, the beautiful work belongs to it's rightful artist

[Dropped] (Going to be rework)

Ray is famed as the #1 player in Arcana Online, a popular VRMMORPG game that has more than 2 Billion players. As a dead person he plays the game like its his life. One day when logging in, he find himself inside a gigantic castle "Wait.... why did I spawn as a baby? Bug?" (Ray) "I can't I log out!??" (Ray) "Huh?! who are you? and how can you talk in my head" "This voice... Leila?" (Ray) "What!! Are you Rey?" (Leila) To think that im reborn in the game and of all people im reborn with the #2 rank player. "F*ck! Isn't this your typical cliche stories?" (Ray) Author note: This is my first novel, im sorry if my grammar is bad as this is not my first language. This is a novel I wrote for my own entertainment im not expecting any reader, but if people start to read this novel I'll fix the quality. Note: I'll probably fix these chapters later in the future. (To be exact chapter 1~17 needed to be fix, and 18~23 needed a little adjustment as for chapter 24~33 I'm not not experienced enough to fix cause I didn't see any thing I did wrong. This probably would change the more experience I get as a writer so please bare with my bad grammar) Art is not mine... If the drawer some how saw this and want to take the picture down msg me.

rework

World Rework

My first shot at a light novel, I apologize in advance for the grammatical errors I’m very dyslexic. Please let me know what you think of it.

being reworked

being rewritted

Sovereign of Magic(Reworked)

(This is a remake of Sovereign of Magic made by Zanerickards) In the year 2056 Mike was a researcher of magic for the hunters Alliance who stood against the monsters the appeared 30 years ago but just as Mike was about to complete a new spell he feints and ends up finding himself in his younger body exactly 30 years ago and so his story begins to become the strongest mage in the universe with his knowledge

The Adventure of the Demon with Virtues (Reworked)

This is the older version of 'The Adventure of The Demon with Virtues'. Around 300 years ago, the great war in heaven met with the bloodlust war on earth. Humans, Demons, elves, beast men, dwarves, all were in the war. When suddenly a beaming bright light emerged from the sky in the last battle of the Great War. This, marked the end of the biggest war in history. Layn Vassago, a young demon teenager who was adopted by a small family in the country-side, was accepted to be enrolled in The Thievens Sins Highschool. A school, that enrolls only the strongest demons in the Kingdom of Thievens. Read his whole journey as he makes new friends and foes, finds his strength and weaknesses, and his struggle in becoming the strongest demon ever.

The Beautiful Rain Rework

A man that got reincarnated, and now is on the way to get back to the real world for her girlfriend's stake, and there is only one way, but what is it? In this story you'll about to find out if he either had a good or terrible life

Dungeon City reworked

a god a dungeon making a empire from a City.

Beginning the legend of Spartan Fire restaurant

Create a Legend (CAL) is the game where Legends are born. Kit's dream is a little different than most who join the virtual reality massive multiplayer online game. He is going to make a stamp on the world with his very own slice of heaven. He aims to open his own restaurant and hopefully turn it into the never achieved before level five restaurant. Will he be able to succeed? Will he fade into the background like many others before him? Join Kit as he navigates the vast empire of CAL, trying to achieve his dream, meeting new friends and killing some monsters. (Currently reworking, completed up to chapter 51)

Call Me Jester Rework

In a world of gods, we thought to be fantasy, were all but separated into a different reality. A group of humans was transported from Earth to this world. A beautiful goddess floated above their heads, and her melodious voice shook their hearts. “Greetings everyone, I'm sure you're all surprised and are wondering what's going on. So please, go ahead and ask me any question." As soon as her words stopped, a single hand came up faster than everyone else. "Oh, you're quite fast fufu. Then, what is your question, Luke Kane." As Luke was about to ask how she knew his name, his mouth moved on its own. "Can I have sex with you." "…" "…" "…" ------------------------------------------------ Hello everyone, Luke here, this is a complete rework of Call Me Jester. I'm sorry to those that liked the original work, but I think with this new one, you might like it even more. Expect to have chapters every day... hopefully, and thank you for reading my book!