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el mundo no es como pinta

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What is el mundo no es como pinta

Leia o romance el mundo no es como pinta escrito pelo autor steven_13949655 publicado no WebNovel. en el mundo cotidiano en el que vivimos muchas cosas no son lo que parecen y lo que aveces uno alcanza a ver al segundo siguiente no esta esta es una historia sobre un chico que que se embarca en ese ...

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en el mundo cotidiano en el que vivimos muchas cosas no son lo que parecen y lo que aveces uno alcanza a ver al segundo siguiente no esta esta es una historia sobre un chico que que se embarca en ese mundo oculto de la sociedad donde rige el control y el poder de los 4 elementos agua-fuego-aire- tierra no como un mago si no como un guerrero.

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ariel1394
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pues hasta ahora lo que presenta bien los personajes muy detallado las acciones que hace eso me gusta debe corregir un poco la ortografía y el orden de habla de los personajes pero en general bien hay que esperar que más nos presenta

marianella_diaz
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Debes corregir la ortografía y demarcar de manera correcta o mejor los diálogos de los personajes. Pero causa bastante intriga tu historia, estoy ansiosa de leer lo que sigue

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