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DEPARTMENTAL STORE SYSTEM

Autor: Bigbro
Eastern Fantasy
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Leia o romance DEPARTMENTAL STORE SYSTEM escrito pelo autor Bigbro publicado no WebNovel. Young boy finds himself in an unfamiliar world and a rundown shop left by his father...

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Young boy finds himself in an unfamiliar world and a rundown shop left by his father

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Lexi_Roberson
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I think for a new novel, it is doing pretty well to say the least. It has a very good plot line, and introduction as well. I loved how the author used very descriptive words to let the reader know what they were trying to say. I did notice there are some grammar issues, and I recommend checking those out. You can use various online grammar error apps, whatever is available to you. I think despite that, the book has a really nice flow to it. The characters are well developed , the only issue I had as a reader were the mistakes in the book. If you can edit those, I think this book would be a hit!!! I want to mention I am the user known as BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!

JustLetMeSleep
JustLetMeSleepLv4JustLetMeSleep

The idea is pretty neat, a little hiccups on some sentences and words but it is a good novel if done right, uploading seems to be good, I know how hard writing is so good job for a first novel if I'm correct that this is not your first.

TOMB_DRONE
TOMB_DRONELv5TOMB_DRONE

its a nice concept, the author is going in the right direction so far and i am not feeling sleepy while reading this novel so far hahhahahah

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

This novel is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! The plot itself was unique and was very engaging to read. I am very well pleased with the writing of the author. Good luck and may your novel be blessed with more readers.

Daoist501779
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cant say much from the first four chapters that i have read...its a start hope you polish the novel cause i think i might read it after waiting some more

Contractor_101
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i love the idea, hope the author does not stop uploading and just a little hiccups with grammar but hey, we are all humans and make mistakes

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