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Comeet Legacy

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[Hello, Levi] The synthetic, automated voice came again. Born a sickling and grew that way, Levi was never ready to bear the consequences and responsibilities of being the host to the construct that burrowed into his neck. Not only did it cure him from his lethal illness, it also granted him extreme abilities. With schemes and lies holding up what's left of the planet, Levi has to suffer loss, anger and betrayal in his endeavour to avenge the murder of his father. But the system doesn't only want Levi to satisfy his own anger-driven desires. It wants Levi to save the remaining population from another Ròkks raid and build a new civilization. What happens when this new intergalactic civilization start falling apart for the same reasons that once pushed him? How much more people—or rather, sentients of different anatomy—lose their lives before balance is restored? //: Every tag is or will be present in the novel:\\

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Chapter 1Mayskeep

Earth's Fall- Day 1- 3:26PM- Needlehead Park, Capricio City, Capricio, South Wing.

"All right Jaden, playtime's over." A young woman stepped into a sandbox stretching out an arm to her son. 

The little boy hesitated, "Really?" He wailed. "Can I stay for a little while?" 

"I'm afraid No" His mother snapped back. "We need to get you out of those dirty clothes and get ready for your Math tutor," She said, squatting to meet her son's gaze. "You don't want to miss maths class do you?"

The little boy looked sad and disappointed. He dropped his sand bucket and got to his feet. "Can my friends come too?"

He noticed his mother's scorn expression, "I'm sure my teacher won't find it-"

"Jaden! How many times will I tell you your friends can't come?!" His mother yelled. The boy looked down. The woman took a few deep breaths before patting his hair. "I'm sorry, okay? I shouldn't have yelled at you."

The boy nodded and she hugged him, "Tell you what? Why don't you go greet off your friends and I'll ready the car, mm?" He nodded once more and she gave him a peck.

"Mom? What's that?" The little boy asked, pointing to the sky. 

"What's what?" She asked in return, turning to meet his gesture. She couldn't believe what she saw. It was an asteroid, at least that's what she presumed. A long stream line of smoke was painted in the sky led by a weird looking blue rock. 

"Cool! An asteroid!" The boy proclaimed, "I have to make sure my friends are seeing this." He started towards the fields but was held back by his mother.

"Come here Jaden, we're going home, now!" The woman said with all sternness and the boy was smart to not argue. The asteroid emerged bigger and bigger, it had started to steer up a lot of people's instincts, because everyone was eventually running for their lives.

"Mom! What's going on?!" The boy yelled in all the commotion, he looked back to catch a glimpse of the extraterrestrial body. It was closer now and already braced for impact. 

Total Casualties: 4, 109, 840, 560 people

Earth's Fall- Day 8360- 6:02PM- Tundra highroads, Tundra, North Wing.

Levi let out a loud series of coughs. He noticed that the old lady sitting next to him on the bus adjusted her position, edging closer to the window.

For Heaven's sake, it's not contractable by air, he thought. He didn't blame her though; she was old. It was better to die an honourable death than a painful one.

Damn! It hurts. His breath seized every now and then. Though he was trying his best not to make the other passengers uncomfortable, he felt like the virus, the elephant in the room. No one needed to say a word for him to understand; he could feel it. He had always felt it all his life.

"Mayskeep?" He could hear the driver ask. Levi raised his hand in conformity. It appeared that the Driver didn't see his hand, "I said Mayskeep?" He asked more loudly.

"Yes... Yes sir" Levi's tiny voice broke up from the third row. Finally, everyone had the chance of an excuse to turn and see the imp. My, my, did he have a little voice for his age. 

Levi ignored the stares, when last did any of them see someone with Lead Syndrome? It's not like their opinion of him mattered. He was going to die in the coming days. 

The Bus came to a stop at a T-junction. 

"Alright. Mayskeep." The driver proclaimed from the front. 

Levi got up and picked up his sack bag. He took one last look at the old woman. Sure, I guess you'll be more at ease now eh? He thought. He made towards the door of the bus. 

Great. Why in seven hells would he be the only one dropping at Mayskeep?

"Take care!" The driver waved before zooming off. Levi watched the bus disappear. Now that was a rare good fellow, he thought.

He turned to face the street, and a rush of nostalgia washed over him. Everything has changed but he could still make out similarities with the memory in his mind. It has been seven years since he left this place, seven years since he left his father—though 'ran away' is a much more accurate description.

Levi pondered as he took painful steps, hoisting his bag over his shoulder." Why did he leave his father in the first place? Because he never gave him attention? No, it's not it, he thought. He was angry, angry at his father, that's why he ran. 

All his childhood and memories were built here and he threw it all away. He wondered how his father was fairing, if he was happy. Was he making a mistake coming here? What if Dad is happy and he shows up just when he's about to die? 

Levi wiped away the free flowing tears from his cheeks. No, he needed to see his father, he is the only person and family that he had. 

The moonlight had just started to light up as he took deep breaths of the cool Atlantic breeze. He could see a few people staring at him from their homes.

Levi recognized the cluster of crawling plants and, as he moved further, everything felt like he had never left. Except for the fact that he couldn't fish out his family's little shade of a home.

"Hey, you boy! Watchu doin' there?" The voice of an aged woman called on him. Levi turned to see an old woman in her night robes.

"Noth- Nothing."

"Nothin'?" She took a long look at him. "You look old enough, thought you'd be in The Academy?" She called out in a surprising loud voice.

"Academy? What Academy?" Levi replied, unsure if she was just a crazy grandma. But the woman merely muttered under her breath and moved to leave.

"Wait!" He called after her. The old lady turned. "Umm, I'm looking for a man who used to live her-"

"You mean Jean Parker?" The aged woman cut him off.

"Yes..yes yes." Levi replied with relief.

"Oh! Haven't you heard? He died 2 years ago from a gas leak... Horrible story."

With that, Levi felt his heart rate spike, his breath hitch, and he blacked out.

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Mandatory Author Review Here! I've decided to drop this review at 100 chapters to provide you with an overall highlight of the story. If you are a fan of immersive sci-fi, this book has been tailor-made for you. It covers the entire evolution of science fiction, starting from the earth-level to the harnessing energy from stars and even time travel. I hope you follow me on this journey through and witness these. The story is built around a naive 17 year old (will later turn into a grown man) who has never been faced with such trials and responsibilities. Responsibilities that he will have to accept to save the extinction of humanity with the help of a chip which burrowed into the back of his neck and could speak to him. The characters in the story are incredibly diverse and unique, making it easy for you readers to become fans of them. Each character's behavior evolves with the story, and every single one of them plays an important role in the plot. The writing style may not be perfect, but I'm constantly improving with each chapter in my first book. Please point out any grammatical errors you come across. The pacing can be described as slightly above average. While a few themes were inspired by Star Wars, the majority of them were influenced by Star Trek. Nevertheless, the story itself is completely original. This is a tragedy novel as people get to die often in it. The red shade will be regularly imagined by you while you read. Not only does this novel focus on the plot and the pre-plot, it also gives a clear understanding of the motives and attitudes of the characters. Yes, this novel contains intergalactic wars and more deeper sci-fi context that are intertwined, providing plot twists and deeper insights that I believe novel readers will love. It has everything a reader might desire. I would love this to be one of the best books on this platform and I highly recommend it. Apologies if the word count in each chapter seems to be small, but it all changes from the 100th chapter. So please don't be deterred by the small chapters early on.

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THIS REVIEW CONTAIN MAJOR SPOILERS!! PROCEED AT YOUR OWN RISK!! This is a book that is reminiscent of the star wars vibes. It is definitely one you'd love to indulge in. It's writing quality is top notch, though not perfect; you rarely notice any mistakes. The way the author portrays the dialogue is not only ideal but realistic. It's one of those books you read with a vivid imagination in your mind! For me, the story development is quite okay. It fully incorporates its weak to strong tag. As it steadily explains how Levi goes from 'the boy with the lead syndrome' to a leader. The novel spends a fair amount of time on its arcs with each transitions being better! Levi's life is changed after he meets Lexi, who not only is his main tool to strength, exposes him to truths that give him a purpose. He builds up a strong will after witnessing a fair share of loss around him. He soon shoulders a lot of responsibilities allowing his to adapt in personalities. Another thing that makes me to aw at this book is it's character designs. Man! There are great. Updating stability? This is one of the strongest point about the author. Since I've been reading this work. He's been diligently updating dailing. He's so consistent that there's no way we wouldn't get a 5 stars! World background? Yes, the story is based on modern earth, but it makes way for Intergalactic travel in the future. Initially, it's even threatened by aliens known as Rókks! I assure you, this gonna be one of you best sci-fi reads! Well, it is for me.

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