Black Ring

I have to give my most sincere congratulations to the author of this story, although it's still in the beginning, each chapter released instigates my curiosity more and more, making me anxious for the next one, you know very well how to create good hooks to continue your story. However, I noticed a certain difficulty in describing the characters, as the introductions are very brief and lack details, but I know that as the story progresses this will improve a lot! Keep writing, you're pretty good at it😁

this story proved to be very promising, it brought some mystery that particularly made me curious for more, there is part that there are cohesion problems, but apart from that there is a future, I await the next chapters