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Ars Goetia: The Six Shards of Dantalion

Autor: KylePower
Fantasy
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What is Ars Goetia: The Six Shards of Dantalion

Leia o romance Ars Goetia: The Six Shards of Dantalion escrito pelo autor KylePower publicado no WebNovel. Marcus and Clara, two young people who live in the world of Sarion. Marcus, a naive orphan who swore to live a good life. Clara, a noblewoman who was gifted a sword by her father as a way of escaping ...

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Marcus and Clara, two young people who live in the world of Sarion. Marcus, a naive orphan who swore to live a good life. Clara, a noblewoman who was gifted a sword by her father as a way of escaping the fate laid out by her mother. Unbeknownst to them, they share a responsibility greater than they know, fated to protect and die for the world. They must learn, through their journey together, the history behind Sarion which is shrouded in many mysteries. Whether it'd be bombings, dragons or politics, they must give it their all if they want to protect the forbidden item that is powerful enough to wage war over: Dantalion's Shard. And an even bigger threat in the distant future... ~ High school boy writing this. Typing on my iPhone 4 TwT *** This is a slow paced story. So please sit tight! Chapters update everyday except Wednesday! *** If you are reading this, please consider giving me some constructive feedback! If you see something is wrong, point it out! It is greatly appreciated and it helps me improve as a writer.

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【Exile + Farming + Spatial + System + Opening Up + No CP】 Just as she crossed over, she was tragically exiled, but fortunately, she had a spatial dimension at her disposal. Rob the house? Rob the air instead. Chen Xue immediately emptied out the Chen Family Estate, from the floor to the bed curtains, even the garden and lake were not spared. She even moved away the several thousand kilograms of food that her enemies had planted to frame her. When the enemies came to ransack the house. The enemy was dumbfounded, “Where are the things? The several thousand kilograms of supplies I secretly placed?” One of the household servants said, “Sir, apart from rat droppings, there’s nothing in the Chen Family residence.” A colleague remarked, “Sir Chen is so honest, there’s not a grain of food in the house, and even the family sleeps on the floor.” Chen Xue said, “My family is really poor, there’s not even a single grain of rice in the jar, we’re so poor we can’t even afford to cook.” So, everyone knew that there was a Mr. Chen in the capital who was struggling and penniless. Chen Xue’s Father: “Whoever says my family is struggling and penniless, I’ll take issue with them!” Chen Xue’s Mother: “It was our daughter who said it.” Chen Xue’s Father: “Ahem, well then, that’s okay.” Chen Xue said that exile was very difficult, not only enduring the wind, sun, rain, but also lacking sufficient food… The convicts and constables sneered, “Go on, we are the ones exiled, you’re practically on vacation.” Among the exiled group, the Chen family lay in the carriage, drinking tea, eating dried fruits, playing Go, leisurely cultivating vegetables in the spatial dimension, and when craving, exchanging snacks like spicy strips from the system, living quite contentedly.

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KylePower
KylePowerAutorKylePower

Hi, I'm the Author of this book. I want to first say that I appreciate all of your continued support for this book🙏. To my dedicated readers, I appreciate all your feedback and the time you've given to this story in order for me to improve. This novel was started 3 years ago as a passion project and I will continue doing so. This book that I'll be writing will have a mix of action, romance, adventure and mystery. There's a lotta lore behind this, so feel free to investigate or search terms up yourself if you don't understand anything. PS: Marcus and Clara say Hello! 👋

DaoistlXvDAF
DaoistlXvDAFLv1DaoistlXvDAF

This is so good for a high schooler good job. Make sure to keep going and enjoy yourself while writing don’t tire yourself out trying to put as many chapters as possible.

Daniel_Twigger
Daniel_TwiggerModeradorDaniel_Twigger

this is a pretty incredible novel i must say. i went into this not thinking to much and i can honestly say I'm really impressed. i love your style of writing and the word building you've done and i will props stick around if you decide to continue this to the end. thanks for giving me something to look forward to : )

TAN_ZI_HENG
TAN_ZI_HENGLv1TAN_ZI_HENG

some parts of the story could be improved, but overall it is good. The characters suit their personality really well, I do think that you should work on some grammar and some words are used in weird context. Overall a good read.

Zach_Curry
Zach_CurryLv1Zach_Curry

Interesting concept and nice world building. First few chapters seem a little slow and doesn't flow well. Overall would recommend a read. Not for everyone.

Nougatesse
NougatesseLv1Nougatesse

This book is a bit more fancy than others (which I personally prefer). Plot is good so far, it builds on more and more information and it gets kinda interesting later on. Suspenseful, Characters are pretty cool and as a shipper, I will do Wallace x Isla.

Ye_Steven_5113
Ye_Steven_5113Lv1Ye_Steven_5113

这是个十分有趣的故事,这个故事的情节犹如天马行空,是个关于冒险,玄幻热血的故事。我十分的敬佩这位作者的丰富想象力,这故事丰富的开拓了读者的想象力和思维能力,其中的情节更能把人带入其中,让人乐此不疲。个人非常喜欢这个故事情节,十分推荐对于那些喜欢玄幻故事的人阅读。希望作者可以继续写出更多类似的故事,本人十分期待下一部作品。

Christopher_Tang
Christopher_TangLv2Christopher_Tang

Very good book, however the first few chapters could have a more better delivery, as it is confusing in come parts of the story. Anyways HALO

Ethan_Y
Ethan_YLv1Ethan_Y

Solid work. It's considered on the long end but it's a different kind of read. It's pretty unique in writing style Nice job. I think chapters should be split up a bit more e.g. around 1.5k to 2.5k but take this as a pinch of salt. Overall, good so far.

TheRandomEpicNoob
TheRandomEpicNoobLv1TheRandomEpicNoob

pretty good! but ive only read the first chapter. some grammatical errors, maybe can build world a bit better, yup! have to fill out characters lol

KingAnnoying05
KingAnnoying05Lv1KingAnnoying05

I love the work, keep it up. I hope you balance your school life and this novel. Some minor issues but they don't shy away the greatness of this novel.

Abhav_Gupta
Abhav_GuptaModeradorAbhav_Gupta

Love the potential of the novel, it has great thought behind it. I love it so far. While the past tense does sometimes slip, it doesn't distract from the overall emotions. For a High School Student great work, I recommend that you read this.

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