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AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

Autor: DreamWeaverWriting
Fantasia
Contínuo · 1.1M Modos de exibição
  • 195 Chs
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Sinopse

Karl always wanted to be a Mage. He was born in the Serion Kingdom, a fully pledged magic Kingdom. Seems like a perfect match, right? Unfortunately, no. He's just a commoner, working endlessly to maintaining the lifestyle of Mages. On his 15th birthday, his last chance to escape from a miserable life was destroyed when he was deemed to have no magic potential. For thousands of Serion's citizens that would be the end of their dreams. But how could this story be any fun, ending like that? Follow Karl and his friends while they tried to fight against the Kingdom's oppression. Will the system bend them to submission or will they break the chains of destiny? Spoiler alert: After thousands of years, an ancient Magic system will be reborn in the small Caiset village. What should you expect? - Kingdom Building: For sure! The heavy lifting will come later, I promise! Foundation is important, please be patient; - Epic battles: A Kingdom is not built without war and conflict. Who doesn't like good fights? Let's bring some excitement to this novel!; - Multiple leading characters: Karl convinced them to get on the bus, but this is a very long trip and everyone will need to drive a little; - Scientific Magic System: Especially Alchemy! I'm in no way trying to take the fantasy out of Magic. I just feel like trying to do something more logical; - World Building: I’m using some basic concepts from traditional Fantasy Worlds and trying to add some nice touches to make it unique; - Fun?: I'll try to insert some humor into the story, but that’s an experience we will go through together. Check out my spin-off novels, Merchant Queen and Harbinger of Death. Both are independent but share the same world and can give additional info on worldbuilding and hidden plots. Don't forget to check the comments section for images (Magic tools, Inventory, ...)

Chapter 1Chapter 1 - Ordinary’s Luck

A young boy walked through a long corridor escorted by two pointy-eared slender figures. The corridor was formed by towering trees that grew further than the eye could see, their thick and long branches filled the empty spaces forming walls coated with countless vines and adorned by beautiful rare flowers.

Once they got to the end of the magnificent path, a gate formed by thorny golden vines opened revealing a heavenly Garden. Fortunately, the boy was lost in amusement and missed the conversation inside.

“It’s insulting! They sent a child to represent them...”

“He is not a common child... Stop your nonsense! Oh... Welcome ambassador!”

Instead of keeping the decorum, the boy adjusted his eyeglasses and asked excitedly:

“Are those the ancient Fehrair symbols? What...”

Before they could process the boy’s indiscretion, the ground started to shake. Cracks appeared and expanded all over. The wooden statues and tree-like buildings started to crumble as screams dominated in chaos.

A thin layer of translucid bluish material circled the boy, forming a perfect sphere that lifted him just before the ground below cracked. The angry-looking Elf also reacted, green energy left his extended hands and controlled the roots below to form a stable platform for them to stand on.

‘Master, should we activate the emergency transport back to the Capital?’ The boy asked in his thoughts.

‘-- Negative. The Central is not responding. Judging by the magnitude of these seismic events, it is a worldwide incident. --’

Then, countless burning debris came crashing from the sky. Several roots and branches extended forming barriers above the Sacred Forest, shielding it from the destruction.

Even so, the debris found gaps and explosions erupted claiming lives all over the Forest.

But life fought back. Several colored lights traveled through the destruction, reviving plants, curing the wounded and reducing the fire.

Soon, the screams were replaced by Blessings, whispers of life that invaded every corner giving hope and strength.

The catastrophe continued, life and death dueled everywhere for days.

Unfortunately, the boy didn’t resist. The floating sphere tried to find a secure place to escape, but only found more destruction. Glowing symbols would magically appear above him to block the debris, but after days they weakened and couldn’t save him anymore.

‘-- I am sorry. Activate transition protocols, parameter search… --’

Thousands of years passed...

***

Through the wildlands of the Serion Kingdom, there’s a Path that connects every city and village. Though simple and unguarded, the Path is magically protected against beasts and thus safe for traveling.

On the Path that connects Wind Castle to the second section eastern villages, traveled a group of miserable commoners. They only wore enough cloth to cover privates, and carried nothing but some pieces of dirty bread. Instead of walking, someone could say they were being dragged by the wind.

Barefooted, hungry and exhausted, Karl looked to the unending Path, praying to finally see the resting point. They have been walking since noon and if his memory was to be trusted, they should be passing a resting point soon.

When he passed this part going to Wind Castle two days ago, he was thrilled and full of hope. It was his first time going out of the village, and also his last chance to be something more. Unsurprisingly, it happened like everyone said it would, he was just ordinary.

Karl was born a commoner in the farming village of Caiset. Physically, he wasn’t very outstanding, his brown hair and yellowish skin were fairly common. As for his body build, face and other traits, the starving and intensive labor didn’t leave much room for growth and development.

Like the majority of the lower-born, he didn’t awake any elemental affinity in his registration ceremony. All citizens of the Serion Kingdom have to be registered and tested for elemental affinity at the age of 15. The young living in villages would travel to the nearest city to be tested by the Serion Magic Association.

There was a tall man with darker hair and skin walking beside Karl. Even tired, the man was doing his best to look after all the children in the group. This year, Karl’s father was the one chosen to accompany the 15-year-old children from the village.

Kanin wasn’t sad or surprised by Karl’s lack of affinity, after all, children of commoners could only be commoners. In fact, all the other boys and girls in the entourage were also depressed. They all looked with a trace of jealousy at a middle-aged man walking by himself. There was a rumor that his son had shown some elemental affinity and had signed up with a big family of Wind Castle.

At dusk, the group stopped at a resting point near the Path.

***

Inside the cave, Karl was filled with frustration and couldn’t sleep. Since he could remember, he dreamt of being powerful. But reality was more powerful than any magic, he would forever be a farmer like his parents.

At sometime through the night, Karl heard a strange sharp sound. The sound continued to increase until he felt like his head would explode. He got up pleading for the Origin to save him from the head-crushing sound and realized no one else was awake or seemed to be bothered by the sound. For a moment he wondered if it was magic, then he just laughed in a self-deprecating and sarcastic way, but a hint of hope remained in his eyes. Who knows? Maybe...

Even knowing that the sound could be anything. Karl couldn’t help but fantasize about having magic. He walked outside and discovered that the sound was louder in the direction of some nearby trees. He hesitated. It could be dangerous. Everyone talked about beasts lurking outside the Path, but he couldn’t resist the chance of it being something magical.

Usually, Karl was smart enough to not get himself into dangerous situations, but something was urging him to go. He couldn’t explain it, something was calling for him and he could only think about finding the origin of the sound.

He walked through the moonlight illuminated trees for about five minutes until he saw a vague light form. The shining form seemed to be emitting the sound. It looked like magic. He still hesitated but ended up moving towards it anyway, this could be his last chance. Slowly, as he approached, the features of glowing forming became clearer, it was a sphere made of some kind of energy.

Karl felt an urge to touch it but stopped right before reaching it. It looked too dangerous.

He took a step back, trying to get some distance from it, but the sphere unexpectedly moved straight to his head. Karl cursed as his vision went white, all he could see was the bright glow of the dense and warm energy. While all kinds of questions passed through his mind, a voice from deep within asked:

‘-- Are you the inheritor? --’

The voice didn’t seem to come from outside, he wasn’t actually hearing it. Who was it? Was it a Mage? For a brief moment, he even considered if the voice was the Origin.

After the initial shock passed, Karl started to think about the question. What should he answer? Inheritor? He never inherited anything of worth, only his commoner fate. Though, what could be worse than what he got? So, he decided to take a risk and screamed his answer.

‘-- So, it will be. --’

In the end, nothing happened. Karl found himself standing in the middle of the trees, the light sphere was gone! After recounting the event and trying to understand it, he gave up and walked back dejected.

Karl thought that he was alone, even forgetting that he wasn’t in the Path. However, something was hiding among the trees, looking at him with hungry red eyes.

It had tracked the boy’s scent in the wind and it was observing him for some time. It knew the prey wasn’t strong and with its brethren nearby he couldn’t escape. The prey wasn’t big, but his scent was so good that made it drool. It only resisted attacking because it was afraid of the energy circling the prey. By instinct, it knew better than getting near that energy.

But soon, the energy disappeared. It still hesitated, but after the prey started moving, it couldn’t resist any longer.

Walking back to the cave, Karl heard something. He felt desperate and remembered about the beasts outside the Path, so he ran. He wasn’t used to running and his body wasn’t very healthy, but the adrenaline and fear pushed him forward.

The first attack came from his left, just midway to the Path. A grey wolf attacked. It wasn’t very big, but its fangs were sharp enough to rip through Karl. The chances of him dodging the attack were zero, but something made him react and duck to his right side, behind a tree.

The movement was enough to escape from the attack, but Karl lost his balance and staggered forward. The second wolf didn’t wait and attacked from behind. Again, something within urged Karl to roll under a small gap formed by a fallen tree trunk, and without thinking, he dodged the second wolf.

His next move didn’t need much thinking, he just dashed towards the Path. But how could he outrun who knows how many wolves?

Karl felt a burst of warmth from his back and after a few more steps he threw himself into the Path. Unexpectedly, something kept the wolves from getting to him just in time for him to get to safety.

He was tired and bruised. He looked at the red eyes disappearing into the night and finally realized the level of danger he had been in. The boost of energy that allowed him to run seemed to disappear and he almost fainted. Without contemplating any further, he went back to his non-sleeping rest inside the cave.

Deep within his heart, the hope for magic had been reborn.

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