Advent. (Part 1 Review)

I'm finally posting a review.

To be honest, I didn't think that an irresponsible person like me could write anything until episode 50, but I did write anyway.

The huge number of comments were the driving force!

How on earth do other writers write?

Are they human?

My inspiration:

The ghosts in the game originally took its inspiration from the RPG Maker game Ib.

Mary, who appears there, is an attractive character who can share the ending with the main character even though she is a villain.

Ah! I was so excited that it would be fun to have a kid like this completely side with the main character. It's better if it's a tsundere.

Therefore, Ella's inspiration would be Ib's Mary.

Naturally, the protagonist of the original game joined the ghost story club.

In particular, Kyeong-min is very similar to the character named Gyeongwon in the novel Ghost Story Club.

However, Ha-rim, the protagonist of the original game, has two more inspirations other than the Ghost Story Club.

The first is the player.

When it comes to games, there are a few games where children are the main characters, and I don't know how they save the world or escape from scary places.

Although we have save and load, following the original flow, she is a person who overcomes any danger, whether it be a trap or a monster.

That's Ha-rim's extraordinaryness.

The second is Faust.

The theme of Faust is "Humans are saved if they work hard", and since this game was created by Mephisto, the standard route is that Ha-rim, who suffers from losing her friends but does not give up, is defeated by great despair at the last moment, in line with Mephisto's tastes.

Mephisto, huh? He's a bit of a sore loser, still holding onto the loss from the bet against Faust.

Anyway, in the work, Ha-rim plays the opposite role of Faust, who is saved by God.

Ella (Alice) is the one who corrected that.

From the point of view of the play Faust, Alice is like a god who brings salvation!

Something I regret while writing this novel.

Crude!!! Extremely crude! Vocabulary is also small.

Awkward! Cringe! People reading this must have been very annoyed. Sorry. I'll do better next time.

There are also too many settings.

I'm not the type of person who plans things in advance, so I write impromptu for each chapter.

So the scale got too big... Save me.

Next, I should have paid more attention to the relationship with the children.

I should have included one episode per person. I'm so sorry. Character development is important, but it seems like I skipped the process of collecting items because I was so busy progressing the story.

There are serious typos, but the biggest problem is... Sudden development...!!!

It would take too long to write one episode if I were to write it while in the military instead of on vacation, so I tried to write it all while on vacation as much as possible.

Although I originally intended for a rapid development, I couldn't properly resolve the foreshadowing, so everyone was like, "Huh? What's going on?".

Sob... Guilty! But remakes are something I just can't do even if I die.

I think the fact that I got tired halfway through writing on my phone also played a role... I'm exhausted from putting so much effort into the illustrations...!

From here, I'll explain the settings, but it won't be fun. Thank you for reading if you don't understand at all!

There are people who don't understand the scene where Alice is born, so let me explain.

In this worldview, if you collect enough sacrifices and fulfill a certain story, it is possible to create a specific demon corresponding to that.

There are several stories fulfilled by the protagonist here, and I will explain some of them.

First of all, it's the monsters. Monsters are the disturbing thoughts of humans. Stories. It is a being made of fear.

It has been mentioned several times that these can be replaced with a form of stimulation and entertainment, just like people enjoy horror games.

Pierrot also saw monsters as a supernatural things to enjoy.

In other words, supernatural is entertainment! Something like that.

Next is Alice in Wonderland.

Alice in Wonderland is the story of Alice's adventures in Wonderland, and as anyone who has read the fairy tale will know, there is a lot of word play here.

Word play = Supernatural feeling.

Wonderland = A place full of supernatural things.

In this way, we created something in common, and the next one is Alice herself.

It was mentioned in episode 33 that the main character thinks of Alice as an extraordinary person.

This is because Wonderland may seem bizarre from the perspective of the general public, but Alice, the main character of the fairy tale, accepted Wonderland as an adventure rather than fear.

Here, Alice has the meaning of someone who turns fear into adventure.

The main character entered a horror game where there was no other way than a despairing end, and succeeded in twisting it to lead to a happy ending.

It is treated as turning children's fears into adventure (play).

The main character is Alice!

As a result of combining various factors, the main character is reborn as Alice the Devil.

In addition, because the protagonist entered Ella's body, his soul was altered to fit the vessel, and his rough appearance was originally a young man with black hair, but he became a blonde woman, and his emotions became richer. His soul also became of a child. It is closely related to mirrors, etc too. There was an entire process involved.

If I show each piece one by one, there will be no end...!

The game is cleared, and the world where the children and the main character were was collapsed. To be precise, Alice was born in the world full of bizarre things!

Anyway, the children return to reality and live their own lives with their memories erased by the agency. Alice got outside... What should I do?

That's part 2... ! She won't be chased by the institution right...?

Part 2 will be published within a month.

If it's a side story or something. If you request it, I will try to write it.

Thank you for reading so far.