Cooking I  

"11 out of 100, no have no technique, no finesse, the only thing you have is a little bit of control." He said as he took a drink of my soup.

His expressions are the worst; his face looks like he had eaten a shit. I know it is bad but never expected this bad to make him contort his face like he had eaten the shit.

I took a spoon beside me and tasted the soup I created; I am quite stumped when I tasted it. It is the best thing, Ive ever cooked, but when I compared to what I tasted before, it tastes like shit.

"You have made many mistakes, and I will tell them to you one by one." He said before he directly looks into my eyes. 

"At the start, you have directly cut through the central node of Kelche, not only of it, but you have cut the central note of other materials too and may many minor nodes."

"Next you…" 

He stated all my mistakes one by one, half of them I hadn't realized I had made.