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  • Palunglaut
    Palunglaut1yr
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    This is a story about protagonist who hates and despise capitalism when other people use it to pressure him but later he become the monster he hates himself and he also using capitalism to pressure other people he doesn't like in return,

    altalt
    Ace of The Dragon Division
    War · Dust Wind
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  • Palunglaut
    Palunglaut3yr
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    I have read this until chapter 160, and to be honest, i kinda dont want to continue further. See, this book author is quite a genius imo, he can drag 2-4 chapters just to explain something. Sometimes the xplanation can be important like xplaining the fey ecosystem and ability, sometimes unimportant like how writing mc's account book how much he spend and gain every penny, and sometimes can be totally useless.like copy-pasting the same fey abilities again and again with just 1 (ONE) skill addition. A good way to fulfill your release and word quotas i guess, good for him, but not really good for me, i mostly scroll all the way every xplanation chapters and totally not missing anything important. Filler chapter is still better than this kind of chapter, at least it's more entertaining. And because of this too, the plot become slow and sometimes stagnant, it's like 3/4 xplanation and 1/4 story. Crazy right? i know. And imo the plot is getting inconsistent over time. Like, at first mc does not want to attract attention cuz he's weak, he got no backing, all that nonsense. But he stronkly pushing his sister to the front row with "my sister is awsum so she must attract attention" logic. I kinda wish his sister got killed off screen and he regret his decision in the future to be honest because of his braindead action. Also mc made a promise to trading agreement with a web shop at the beginning, saying he's not an ungrateful person who pay other's kindness, but until chapter 160 that matter never comes to surface again. Well maybe becuz mc already rich guy now so he thinks it's alright to forget his promise, and thus he become the ungrateful bastard himself. His first retainer which he promised to heal also never appear again after he told him to find a big shop in the capital. Maybe he retired and decide to donate his insect queen to mc off screen lmao. That's my opininon, go read it if you like this kind of writing. I'm not here to judge you.

    altalt
    Fey Evolution Merchant
    Eastern · Amber Button
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  • Palunglaut
    Palunglaut3yr
    Posted

    Textbook example of a writer who pursue word count, this novel consist of 2 part plots / 8 part infodump. Author trying to explain every little thing to padding his book, from game system about terror point (1 chapter), xp sharing point (1 chapter), reward point (1 chapter), level setting background (1 chapter), protagonist explaining his vast knowledge about npc and level plotline while the other players listening and responding differently, some following some berating (1 chapter), protagonist explaining boss weakness, weapon and item attribute (1 chapter), etc. With just that, author has serve you 6 chapters to fulfill his quota. Should be titled InfoDump Paradise instead lmao, and you think from the others review this is a good story. Either they are bot accounts with template or 50-cent army.

    altalt
    Thriller Paradise
    Games · San Tian Liang Jiao
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