So the translation is not horrible but it is nothing to write home about. There is practically no world development except the town name. For a game in vr there is almost no mention of npc's and the only interaction with players is minimal at best. The character contradicts himself and his situation in real life is highly illogical and just weird. So storywise it's mostly: i do this, that is the results, i leveled up a bunch and here are my stats. The idea is not bad but the execution is lacking.