TheMaddestMan
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This and the mech touch are the only two books which keep me coming back to webnovel. Just outstanding world building, interesting characters and believable character progression. I particularly love these Naruto style missions he goes on to show off new abilities. Too many of them and it would get repetitive but I feel like the author has struck a good balance between missions to show off abilities and character centric plot progression. Keep doing great work 👍😃
Ok I'm dropping this story, why are you even writing a story if you don't want to show us a story. You just tell us meaningless numbers of all powerful animals and the end result of how his house is powerful. We know literally nothing about Krakens, these Krakens could be as powerful as a flopping salmon, or each one could be a world eater. Somehow house Mormont now owns and controls 24 of them for some inane reason. With how little meaning and impact they have had so far on the story, I am questioning why you even included them.
Jesus Christ why are you rushing the plot so fast. You could devote at least a whole chapter to each of these massive revelations you brought up. Instead you decided to make the taming of twelve Krakens a single sentence. I know he can tame animals but you've gotta restrict and create some rules around it. On top of that actually tell the story of how he found Krakens, maybe even name a few.