Jack_Pengu_of_Yin
just a bored wacky guy who just wants to read about something new everyday >^< also just wanna have fun, if your life ain't fun why live it amirite!
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No, that was far too dangerous. The tradeoff wouldn't be worth it, and it would leave too much of a trial for those with sinister intentions to follow.- Jack_Pengu_of_Yin1mthCommented
typo, properly it should be The* three Ogres are* definitely formidable. You can just use were* as well if you want, love the story tho, keep it up!
This paragraph has been deleted. - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin2mthCommented
not necessarily, if the author wants cameras, let there be cameras
"Oh, Silvana wasn't lying... This is really no different from the real experience. No wonder there's such a long line for these cameras, even among the Phantoms." Adam looked at his hands, on which tiny grains of sand were falling, few in millions. - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin7mthCommented
10/10, barbatos still has the best thoughts
'This version of him seems like someone who would roughly devour me like a beast for days and not even cuddle afterwards...' - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin7mthCommented
actually it's his five head now, it's evolved not even its final form.
It was a rope that went around Lyrian's forehead while he walked or climbed up the side of the mountain, with a giant rock attached to the bottom of the rope. - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin7mthCommented
what about his parents? did he just abandon them and go off to do some caveman stuff 😂😭
After cultivating Gale throughout the night, Lyrian entered the forest once again at the dawn of the following day. - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin7mthReplied to BlueCactusE
no no, let him cook
"Impossibru," Terry said. "I can't use that technique again. It consumed too much of my energy. The enemies outside should be plenty wounded as well. So, we can deal with them as long as we work together inside here." - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin8mthCommented
he's at least "emerald"
The other youngsters also couldn't believe it. They wore bitter smiles on their faces. They had originally thought Ye Li was a bronze-level player, but they hadn't expected him to be a king-level player. - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin8mthCommented
also a typo here, leonel's name is messed up
In the recent days, because of Leoenl and Aina, many had begun thinking that the gap between the Sixth and Seventh Dimensions wasn't so large after all. If they put in more effort and took their training more seriously, they could maybe be like Leonel and Aina… - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin8mthCommented
there's a typo here, "what he could do, even with his intelligence"
Although Leonel had partially deduced this matter, there was still a limit in what he could do evne with his intelligence when information was so limited, especially when there were so many other answers that likewise made sense. It also didn't help that the answer simply didn't seem all that important. - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin1yrCommentedCh 1629 Pissed
- Jack_Pengu_of_Yin1yrPosted
I'll be honest here, I really enjoy the fresh way of writing, and how everything is introduced, but i read up to 30 chapters in, and i still feel super confused, i understand and i do enjoy the fact that its slowly getting introduced with background and hints and stuff, but it isnt my kind of story, it makes me feel like the journey was simply skipped, it just jumps straight to the point where he's over the fact everyone he knew was ripped away from him and he had to go on the run, and he jumps straight to revenge, i dont think it's bad writing, because it really isnt, it's well written, its never really boring at all, and its a great plot. But if you're the kind of person who enjoys both the highs and lows of a character, seeing how they bounce back from defeat, it may take a while to actually get there, and see the actual journey the character has along the way. i do enjoy it and might even recommend it to some, but i personally cant read the book.
- Jack_Pengu_of_Yin1yrReplied to Sound_Hammer
Honestly i thought the jittery part was a pretty good indication, also her repeating everything he told her is a pretty good sign as well. It's a little vague, but there are definitely signs.
"I do have all the assets necessary for winning Xeonith over, don't I?" - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin2yrCommentedCh 782 He Was Leonel Morales.
- Jack_Pengu_of_Yin2yrReplied to DaoCoffee
A man's a man, But when you see a king, you see the work Of many thousand men.
He was Leonel Morales. He would be a King. - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin2yrCommented
Poor man wanna be rich; Rich man wanna be king. And a king ain't satisfied Till he rules everything.
He was Leonel Morales. He would be a King. - Jack_Pengu_of_Yin2yrCommented
I hate you, DESPISE YOU EVEN. This is a crime against humanity and we demand retribution. The Flames of war have been stoked, We will release the horde unless you pay the tribunal its due. If we are not met by a mass release by sundown. You will be found guilty under the powers of the Dao of Reading. These cliffs shall no longer be acceptable. Blood Debts requires Blood Due.
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