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Well it probably due to the plot of your story. Still, I am not talking about Chidori level ninjutsu but Kirin an S-Rank level technique. That things once set there’s no dodging them because it use real lightning rather than Chakra Base one. I genuinely hope in the later arc your story would be more interesting.
Mentioning Itachi? If we look at the timeline there should be a battle happening between Itachi and Sukuna. Because the amount of time u burning Shisui corpse would have been the time where Itachi look for Shisui and witness the whole thing. With Itachi witness Shisui dead he would have awaken Mangekyo and the story would end here. There no way a half baked copy of Sukuna capable of fighting an Insane Itachi after witness his friend and mentor death.
Nah, you down play Shisui ability too much. A dying Itachi manage to tank Sasuke Kirin which arguably faster than whatever Sukuna might have on his sleeve with Full Body Susanoo. Put it in a scenario where he couldn’t see the attack he would have still sense the danger similar to Itachi case. Also moving for a Sharingan is uncalled for, it all just too convenient for the MC. Another flaw is MC body frame. You said he couldn’t use Ninjutsu which mean he won’t have access to transformation Jutsu. What does this mean? Danzo are not the smartest but he do have his schemes and with Root behind him there’s won’t be any escape for MC at all. Also cutting Shisui leg? Where does he get that kind of power when you mention that he barely making mark on a tree and overestimated himself a few chapters ago?
Existence cutting slash from Sukuna are undoubtedly invincible in power output. Even Gojo skill with Reverse Curse Techniques ain’t enough to save him from certain death. So it’s hard to say for sure. Like it or not reverse curse techniques are very OP and Sukuna are skill enough to replace Yuji heart. So he definitely good enough to even challenge Madara and Obito.
It’s probably for the plot. Chakra are just term for energy. Maybe he prepare it for Nine Tail Beast or other source of Chakra but man it too much of going in circle. Why bother creating new character, you can just personified Sukuna himself.
You only see it from a reader perspective. How about get into Minato mindset for a change? Why did he propose this idea in the first place. It because he did witness Enso affinity with his Flying Raijin. But then again, the MC are too young to skip into S-Rank technique without any solid foundation. Your ideas would work and it not wrong either it just different in perspective. I am trying to write a 200 + chapter, so I need to hold back the MC a little in a good way. Every battle in his early growth would be a learning experience instead of one side dominant. But then again, I still make MC close to Kage level in the latest chapter and had to shift focus from MC growth and develop the support character.
Wait, this is an Uchiha. Let me put it in a consideration list.
Honestly, she look real good. But her IQ and abilities are too low. I don’t know if it’s a good ideas to use such characters. I am looking to use a character that at least won’t be a burden to MC and his future organisation. Kurenai won’t survive an initial conflict against Akatsuki. Even if I am upgrading her, she would still be weaker than Shikamaru and at most reach Peak Sakura lvl. Ideally using someone who at least have talents for close combat, so the MC romance can develop during those guiding session. I’ve been struggling between having one or two love interest for the MC. After all, big part of the future plots involves having MC rebuild Uzumaki. Definitely, not the weak version that Naruto build in Boruto.
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