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FrozenSky1mthCommentedOr she's one of the 7 level cultivators to reach the top 100.
Moreover, Han Yi could see that their attitude towards Chu Jinmo was subtle, as if they were somewhat in awe, which baffled him.- FrozenSky1mthCommented"Traveling together is better... indeed better traveling together…"
- FrozenSky2mthCommentedThe provincial inspector was actually such an elegant old lady?
- FrozenSky2mthReplied to _RonneNick was nowhere near the most rich person in the country but in about three years he predicted he would be at least close to having that amount of money. The only real stress that Nick had at the moment was the ever approaching arrival of zeus and this new magic eating abomination in the form of Bellatrix Lestrange at peak health and beauty. Oh yes the ritual fully restored her body to it's most perfect state which in addition to the fact she was actually very attractive naturally meant the creature was much like the vibrantly colored animals in the wild , pretty to look at but lethal to mess with.-
- FrozenSky2mthCommented"Uncle, is my toy bear 'Tibbers' really here?"
- FrozenSky2mthCommentedChris, "The name of the of the club will be: The Hogwarts Home Club or HHC." Putting his hand on his heart and pausing for a few seconds for to create the atmosphere,he said, "I was an orphan untill a few months ago and I feel like... Hogwarts is a like a home to me. And I know, that a majority of the students think the same. Thus I couldn't see the standards of our home going so low that the students can't learn anything in an entire subject. And that's the reason why I decided to open this club! To help those students who wanted to learn magic but couldn't... to help those new students who think that Hogwarts is a place where education is taken as a joke and even a fraud can get a job... to help those students, who think that the standards of Hogwarts' magical education are slowly going down... to help those OWLs and NEWTS students whose future is getting harmed because of one subject... And...to help those students who can't catch up with other students and think they're not talented. I want, every single one of these people to also feel the same happiness and excitement that I feel while living and studying at Hogwarts to feel at home at this place! So... my fellow students, lets make our home an even better and exciting place together." he said, spreading his hands apart.
- FrozenSky4mthCommentedCh 49 Chapter 49 : Att school
- FrozenSky4mthCommentedNick was nowhere near the most rich person in the country but in about three years he predicted he would be at least close to having that amount of money. The only real stress that Nick had at the moment was the ever approaching arrival of zeus and this new magic eating abomination in the form of Bellatrix Lestrange at peak health and beauty. Oh yes the ritual fully restored her body to it's most perfect state which in addition to the fact she was actually very attractive naturally meant the creature was much like the vibrantly colored animals in the wild , pretty to look at but lethal to mess with.-
- FrozenSky4mthReplied to killersoul
I kind of agree here. I have read up to chapter 7, and while I believe the story could be good at this point, I can't get over the grammatical errors. It seems to be unedited throughout. As if the author just typed up the page and hit send, without even using grammarly or anything. And so far, it seems like the story has taken inspiration from multiple different sources, and I believe the author has taken on more than they can handle. The multiple different systems that the author is trying to incorporate could all individually be their own story. I don't know if this author is mature enough as a writer to incorporate this many different aspects. At this point, this is going to go into my future reading list. Hopefully, at that point, someone would have gone through and proofread this story.Also, this is not a critique to stop the author from doing what they do. But I felt like it needed to be said.
- FrozenSky4mthCommented
If i'm not mistaken this chapter and the next couple are out of order.
Lesser Divine Technique - FrozenSky4mthCommented
I'm pretty sure this is a missing chapter halfway through it. Is it supposed to go before the previous chapter?
Battling Against Demons! - FrozenSky4mthCommentedWith a scream, it turned into a black light and was stored inside Li Ming's bag.
- FrozenSky5mthCommentedIf he had Spirit Stones, it would have taken only about two quarters of an hour.
- FrozenSky5mthCommented
We all know this is what she wants.
"Even more deserves to be beaten, but unfortunately not an opponent, otherwise I would definitely press him down and beat him hard to vent my frustration!" Lan Xin gritted her teeth. - FrozenSky5mthCommented"This guy is too hypocritical!" Qiang Jiu fingered him.
- FrozenSky5mthCommented
Is this the wrong chapter? This is the same thing that was on the end of the last chapter.
CHAPTER 27 (Slightly R-18) - FrozenSky5mthCommented"Hello, young Barty. Since you were so kind as to join us, I have a question for you. Where is my friend?" Dumbledore asked calmly...
- FrozenSky5mthCommented
my interpretation, but blonder
Evangeline Greenwood, Empress of the Elves!