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cloaked_poet4 years ago
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Good but sad chapter, perhaps we will one day see them again but if not oh well
Ch 86 A Farewell
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
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albedo moment
"But now I see you are here, starting a new life in a new body. Oh, my master, how my heart races to see you again!" Valera rushed forward using the warrior skill [Dash], turning into a blur as she slammed into Aldrich and hugged him. "My dear, dear master whom I had devoted my entire soul to!"
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
Replied to Gutkha_Bhaiya666
I meannnnnnnnn it's based on elden world (elden ring) haha, I'm pretty sure it's gonna be mostly based on the soulsborne series in general haha
Melee characters used skills that had a charge based system and not spells that consumed mana, so they could set all the charges on their flask for healing. Mages, however, had to generally set aside around half of their charges for mana.
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
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Estus flask moment
As a result, mages generally had to rely on using consumables to recharge their mana, specifically using an item called the [Restorative Flask].
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
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Jojo moment
Solomon Solar's ability was called Sunlight Overdrive, and with it, he could absorb solar energy into himself at immensely increased efficiency, using it to make his body insanely strong, fast, and durable. Not to mention he could fly at supersonic speeds and blast out intensely hot beams from his eyes.
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
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That's video games for you
A type of escapist fantasy, he supposed.
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
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true
Surprisingly,, the game was a shinier shade of gold than any he had found so far. Elden World was highly fleshed out and basically complete, and Aldrich had sunk in hundreds of hours of gameplay in it.
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
Commented
Elden ring is a really good game
A strangely hidden but amazingly fun game called Elden World which he had picked up at a rundown game store, a store that had long since closed down and been bulldozed away.
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
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a variant of the irl blackwater mercenaries in the novels alt reality?
A no-name, smalltime academy called Blackwater. The academy had little information surrounding it, making it immediately suspicious, but it was willing to see past Aldrich's poor mental evaluation.
Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever
cloaked_poet4 years ago
Replied to AppleyGod
Darksouls lets gooo
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Super Necromancer System
Fantasy · John_Doever

The system encyclopedia

Want to write a system novel but don't have any ideas about what type of system to use? Want to base your novel around a useless gimmick which gives you a instant excuse on why your main character is living a power fantasy? Well look no further! I will be writing up system ideas and upgrade paths for anyone who would be desperate enough for views to write in this genre !

cloaked_poet · Urban

5 Chs

Trashy story

Full of meta and not much to this Mocking a myriad of heavens with bliss? Is this true happiness I see? Who am I? the author to be! Author here! to preserve quality I'm likely going to do a semi rewrite and also try my hand on other platforms since 3 chapters per day is abit much and considered only upper average here, I'll try to increase quality though My story is about the breakdown of xianxia tropes + isekai tropes and the effect of what they can do to the world if realism is present. Here are some examples of the tropes i've gotten through so far as of writing this >The world being created around the main character with them being developed before anything else >Bandits and them being deemed "worthy of death" just on the premise that they harm the main character and or anyone related. Remember being a bandit in some wuxia worlds is a last resort due to the often horrible society. >The main character randomly powering up after screaming or being in pain / anger. >A antagonist appearing right away as another is defeated. >Young masters and the effects of their deaths. (power struggle / vacuum) note this is currently on version 1! A new rewrite will be written elsewhere until I can improve the quality of the latest chapters!

cloaked_poet · Eastern

47 Chs