Chinagirl
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I really enjoy this book. One comment on editing: you often switch between the pronouns ‘he’ and ‘she’ even when you are referring to the same character. This can be very confusing so you may want to watch out for it 😊
Good luck with finishing up!
I really like your story! Keep yp the hard work 😊👍🏻
Lol!
The world gets larger once more as our character grows into his new space!
Lol, good point!