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Chinagirl

Chinagirl

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I enjoy reading all types of stories!!!

2017-11-17 JoinedUnited States
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  • Chinagirl
    Chinagirl2yr
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    I really enjoy this book. One comment on editing: you often switch between the pronouns ‘he’ and ‘she’ even when you are referring to the same character. This can be very confusing so you may want to watch out for it 😊

    Ch 186 Developments
    Seven Sins Demon Fox
    Fantasy · LorienRenard
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  • Chinagirl
    Chinagirl3yr
    Commented

    Good luck with finishing up!

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    Seven Sins Demon Fox
    Fantasy · LorienRenard
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  • Chinagirl
    Chinagirl3yr
    Commented

    I really like your story! Keep yp the hard work 😊👍🏻

    Ch 173 Rewards
    Seven Sins Demon Fox
    Fantasy · LorienRenard
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  • Chinagirl
    Chinagirl3yr
    Commented

    Lol!

    "I've never seen such a bunch of wimps! Originally, I thought you wouldn't be able to insert it in, but now, you can't even get it up!"
    True Martial World
    Eastern · Cocooned Cow
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  • Chinagirl
    Chinagirl3yr
    Commented

    The world gets larger once more as our character grows into his new space!

    Ch 142 Divine Capital
    True Martial World
    Eastern · Cocooned Cow
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  • Chinagirl
    Chinagirl3yr
    Commented

    Lol, good point!

    With that said, he patted Yi Yun's shoulder firmly. He liked this youth more and more.
    True Martial World
    Eastern · Cocooned Cow
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