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Honestly some of the worst power fantasy I've ever seen. Grammar is all over the place. The insert is dropped in so powered up it makes a WC look powerless. Immoral on his choice of bedmate, which is just lazy in a multiverse setting. Idk if you're a bored horny kid you might like this, but I couldn't find anything to write home about.

He's super arrogant, but tbh that's kind of expected, but where this really loses me is when his sword is like a magic girl. Like wtf I can get integration power wise but this is a little too out of context for that universe. Not for me. Not really recommended. Translation is okay but has some weird edited spots.

This reminds me a lot of the protagonist from losing money to be a tycoon. He doesn't really want to go the training route because of danger, but the world setting has everyone else being kind of dumb, so he ends up bumbling his way to the elite. His pokemon's personalities are where this is a real winner. His starter is just so self motivated and a pleasure to read. The translation quality is like 500% better than MTL, like pokemon is one of those things where it doesn't MTL well because the names end up as "ghost rock", etc. So I'm happy to see it getting a solid translation. I'd rate this as one of the better translations I've read. Looking forward to more!

Haunter really is the star of this show. Like the parts with him are the most interesting.

Seriously hard to get into. God let him pick way to many OP perks. The guy knows everything before he's born, like seriously he should have spent the last wish to skip 6 years so he doesn't have to be a baby. He's super OP, knows everything, but he is dumb as a rock. He knows everything, has super bullshit build, AI helper, etc. Like dude don't save a wish for if somehow you are going to be on the back foot, use it to skip time in womb.

I wish there was more of an epilogue. Honestly it was a warm read, like no one you care about dies. Seriously though a timeskip to 10 years later would be great.

Who would hate this. His story was so sad in original, anyone who can do something about it and chooses not to is bad.

The lack of planning really shows. Like the expansion is too fast and unrealistic, even with magic. He (a Northern) decided to f-off to essos and become a horse lord. It's just crazy.

seeing as last chapter ended in "end of novel" I'm assuming these are extras?

This was pretty solid until volume 4. At that point the author completely forgets everything about the MC and decides he needs to experience a traumatic event and have issues and personality changes in the aftermath. Which is fine, but the traumatic event itself is less impactful than four different situations earlier in the story. The entire thing feels super fake/forced. Writing around that area has huge issues with telling us stuff vs showing it. I swear I read lines like the following at least 10+ times. "He won't be the same after this", "This could change him forever", etc. The huge kicker is he starts acting all emotional when back at home. He showed zero personality changes earlier in the story (after kidnappings, murdering poachers, selling pokemon on black market, murdering pokemon to use as food for his current team). So why is he acting like a baby now?