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Good book! Interesting in a way that you'll be excited to know more about the characters. And the first chapter is entertaining. 😉 Good job, author! Jeep writing!
A good book! I like how you explain things that we have to visualize it. I like it so much that you are explaining the setting not into direct words to tell the environment, atmosphere and all. Good job!
Nice plot there! A very rare one. Good writing quality also. Will this be a short novel? Cause u locked it so early. But good job there. It's the first book i have read in this kind. Very rare that deals with science. Great great great!
An uncliche plot there. I like how you separate the paragraphs. And you write so well. Good job! I expect more action scenes. Hehe nice one there, author!
Nice! This book is interesting especially in the beginning chapters. And the title left me a question why it was chosen as the title. So keep writing, andwe'll know. I love the writing quality and how you explain things. Keep it up!
while reading, I am imagining this in an anime movie. this book is good. not cliche. the chapters are long, but has good flow of the story. nice plot there!
nice! you have there ideas that are uncommon or not so cliche. keep it up, author. it's just that the chapters are short. most of the readers here prefer long chapters. but it's up to us, authors to decide for our works. what i can say is though the chapters are short, the story is still going fine along. good job!
This is indeed a unique book. The parents have encountered same scenario before. Nice plot! Keep it up. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
Yes, this is a good book. Not so common plot,but I have read one or two plots like this. I expect there are a lot of twists here. keep it up! I just think you might want to work on the narration part. sometimes, you are using present tense, which is supposed to be past in past tense since you are using it most of the times. But I really like the plot, all in all. 💙
I'm not yet done reading this. But I'm already hooked up to this book. Among the novels I have read these past few days, this is the best one. No favors, no lies. I couldn't find any corrections. Most of my reviews to other novels have suggestions, but I could not think of one here. This is perfectly written. How to be you? 😭😁 I'm a fan. 😊💕