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taylor99442yrCommentedfor once can we get a mc who goes his own way instead of interfering with every little thing that involves the plot
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what a disappointment a fan boy who is probably only going to think about how to help the avengers
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he has all magic including mind magic couldnt he just make himself think faster or parrell thoughts thats the first thing any mc should do when they find themselves with magic is make themselves smarter
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yea being a lackey is the definition of a mediocre person
Obviously, to be able to become an inner disciple's lackey, no matter how stupid Zhao Jun was, he wasn't a mediocre person. - taylor99442yrCommented
no a stupid mc he should have been asking questions all the time while he was safe but he doesn't it seems he only asks when something is right in front of him and only then does he ask the bare minimum
"I will ask questions later... for now run!" - taylor99442yrCommentedCh 35 Chapter 35(The truth part 4)
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why has he not bought the growth skill it literally is a skill that will increase his strength with time so the sooner he buys it the better
"That was a good yield... a total of more than 40000 points. The larger the fish the more point they will contribute me with." - taylor99442yrCommented
now this is were you ask what other functions the system has this guy is reallllllllllllllllllllllllly dumb
While hearing this... I slowly wandered my gaze around my body. Examining it particularly the injury area. To my surprise, the injury was no longer there. - taylor99442yrCommented
so why use it
"Yeah... no matter how many times it is. I can't get used to this sleeping function. It felt so unusual." - taylor99442yrCommented
now this is were you ask how else is he different from a common snake
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what a amount of info all the info is there is 7000 continents in this domain
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this is the time were someone would ask what other changes the system made
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i dont like this to dependent on the system he cant even sleep without it
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this is just forced plot
"Agreed. I would have kept an eye on Sona without the need for anyone to ask. But that is not what happened. Sirzechs asked to be in the city on a daily basis, assuming the job of a homeroom teacher for the school where they will be studying while there." - taylor99442yrCommented
this is like those Harry Potter fics you read were someone tries to actually kill him and he is like I will prank him and that will make everything even.
Erik said as the women calmed down. Those idiots of the Old Satans' faction continued, from time to time, to try to get their revenge on everyone that had something to do with the new Satans. When Serafall announced her pregnancy to the underworld, the attacks on Erik stopped just to start again with Serafall as the target now. Serafall's peerage had to stay always at her side when she was not at home, that is, the ones who were not pregnant too. The number of attacks that they stopped could not be counted on their hands alone. It reached a point where Erik had to step in. He made everyone who worked for them to get mysteriously sick of the belly every time that they approached an area of five hundred meters around Serafall, with the pains increasing as the distance got shorter. Those that were 'smart' enough to cast spells to numb the pain discovered quickly what happened if they got within the range of tho hundred and fifty meters of Serafall. Let's just say that the personal shame of not managing to hold its own bowels was not a good 'payment' and made them get spotted easily. A similar thing had happened with Grayfia when she got pregnant with Milicas. Sirzechs had to put all of his peerage members as guards. Due to Grayfia's past, they were coming after her with some extra heartiness. - taylor99442yrReplied to GodOfFreedom
The hawkeye route i like that you never see that you always see the mc going around collecting all the hot girls for his crew and them not being able to do anything cause there usually weak but a lone wolf with the strength of entire pirate crews now that is interesting
Ch 9 Chapter 9 – Body Control and Swordmastery - taylor99442yrCommented
I hope you don't make him leave and start pirating at too young age you always see these stories were the mc starts his journey at like 12 and that is always a turn off I hope he is at least 15 if not more so he can get more training and it would make a little more sense because if a 12 year old pops up in the east blue and is probably the strongest there I don't believe that the marines wouldn't send someone to arrest him right away
Ch 9 Chapter 9 – Body Control and Swordmastery - taylor99442yrReplied to Nale_Sheeeeeee
but his last quest was 5km
-1km sprint