Really good so far , great opening chapter! Dialogue is flawless and writing quality is top tier. Interested to see how far you can take this novel Author, keep it up 💯💪

yh im in there already , would be nice to talk to authors 1 to 1 though

Do you have a discord by any chance? I'm also an aspiring author, it would be beyond amazing if you could tell tell me about some tips about writing. I'm really struggling and i'm kind of at a loss for what to do. Would really love to get the advise off an author 🙏

I see, so in jnc ur able to publish books similar to webnovel? Can anyone make a publishing or do you have to go through a contract process etc?

what competition was it in january?

Let the showdown begin 😄

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Facts!

Thanks for the chapter

A very unique and interesting premise. Quality of writing is top tier, cannot wait to continue reading this. First chapter so far is very good and makes you want to know what happens in the future. Judging from the synopsis did i hear summons? 👀 I'm excited to know how the author will harness this in a world of samurai. You got my 5 stars, keep it up!

Yeah your not wrong, usually in cultivation novels age is a big factor to define strength. Obviously exluding the young geniuses that sometimes can fight guys above their realms. Appreciate the comment, would also really love a review if that is possible! Thank you.

Appreciate it bro!

Nah bro, i didnt get any of them. I shouldve gotten it. Feel so sick.

Thank you, your comments mean everything! Please stick with this story, i will try my best to not dissapoint you! Appreciate the power stones alot! Keep commenting, that way i will know people are reading this! Thank you!!!

Thank you so much for your comment! Yes indeed, madara is op. Have a look at my synopsis, you will see why the system is here haha. Without giving you any spoilers, the system isnt really on the side of madara. Madara is one of those characters in fiction that need to be killed, otherwise leaving such a man alive would spell doom for everyone in the series. His mindset and ability to adapt is horrifying. Forget the naruto verse, put this individual into any fiction verse and youve got yourself an existencial threat. Him reincarnating into the world of cultivation , i honestly feel bad for the cultivators loool. I think thats why the system is even there in the first place, protect the world from Madara! Lets see how Madara not only clashes with the inhabitants of the world, but also the so called system ;)

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Yup 🤣🤣🤣 This is only the beginning loool. Madara is in for a treat 😉