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the jumpy writing feels kind of amateurish. it feels like I'm reading through a series of drafts at a steady pace. the issue has gotten even more pronounced in recent chapter. Anyways, I like Ben 10 so I'll keep on reading even though 33 percent of the time my brain can't keep up
Well, the ship was specially designed to shuttle and launch Mechs. using something else would require a jurryrig solution that would probably harm the ship. I also doubt the legality of launching rocks. MTA has rules and I believe it would be considered a weapon if the ship were to use asteroids I guess it could be possible on red ocean though. it does become a multipurpose design. good idea
this story seems all over the place. one paragraph cuts to the next without any continuity or bridges. jumping from character and scene to another just like (snaps) that feels somewhat uninteresting. can't concentrate on s scene of it's 5 second pulses of each story and there are 10 at the same time
author said he got inspiration from dial in the mcu. an royal road story .highly recommend it .