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Flip423mthPostedThe user who uploaded this is commiting plagiarism. This story was published on fanfiction.net back in 2014 by Fahad09 under the title "A Demon Lord's Hero".
This book has been deleted.- Flip424mthReplied to unit_201Ch 26 When Preconception Breaks
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- Flip426mthCommented
It's very enjoyable so far, the pacing is good. Most Atg fanfics are way too fast in power scaling.
Anyway, what do you think about the story so far? - Flip427mthCommented
Wth is that last sentence? [img=faceslap]
"That's the classic situation that happens every time someone who saved a Princess's life appears in the palace." Xiao Xianzhi said while looking at the boy and a blunt Icicle appeared in his hand. He threw it at a pi/2 degrees angle from vertical and the Icicle landed on Prince's head and made him unconscious. - Flip4211mthReplied to Nova_Shadowsky
Okay it's just strange that they have digital music streaming, smartphones and everything but only 8bit digital music which is indeed very limited. A bit of a plot hole.
On the other hand, traditional vinyl turntables offer unparalleled sound quality. When songs are stored on a computer, they undergo compression, causing the loss of top and bottom wavelengths. This process is also responsible for 8-bit songs, although they employ a different approach to achieve the desired outcome. - Flip4211mthCommented
Thats just not true, uncompressed audio files exist. And for quite some time actually. 16 bit 44.1khz (CD-Quality) is designed for the human hearing range 20 to 20000 Hz. Anything outside that range can't be heard anyway so it's useless.
On the other hand, traditional vinyl turntables offer unparalleled sound quality. When songs are stored on a computer, they undergo compression, causing the loss of top and bottom wavelengths. This process is also responsible for 8-bit songs, although they employ a different approach to achieve the desired outcome. - Flip421yrCommented
Reminds me of the The Third Magic, Heaven's Feel.
Zenith Heaven Emperor's soul became a high-dimensional planar being capable of interacting with the material world as a mental body without having to return to the cycle of Reincarnation. This gave him an unparalleled advantage in his cultivation. He also acquired an unlimited source of energy due to his soul becoming analogous to a perpetual motion machine. - Flip421yrReplied to Ahlios
I think EX just means unmeasurable, so there is nothing above that.
His agility was ranked- it was actually unranked.. B+ Ranked Strength, A++ Ranked monstrous Endurance, C Ranked Mana and D Ranked Luck.. With this absurd prowess, how was she even supposed to sustain him at max output? - Flip421yrCommentedBiscuit tried saying, "Trace On," but no sound was heard. Rayleigh removed the dome of silence and said, "Let's see if it worked." Gon had his book out and cards like Defensive Wall which could be used to block attack spells, so the card in Biscuit's hand would take 15 seconds to go off, giving time for Gon to defend himself.
- Flip421yrCommented
That is not true for reality though. Sagittarius A* (Central supermassive blackhole in our galaxy) is actually only 0.00036% the mass of the galaxy. Solar systems are held together by gravity of their sun but galaxys are held together by dark energy/matter.
This black hole is essentially the heart of the Milky Way and is equivalent to 10% of the galaxy's total mass. It holds everything in the galaxy together from flying into space. - Flip421yrCommentedAnd then he would have to be trained by Piccolo, that excited him too but there was still plenty of time for it to happen.
- Flip421yrReplied to Flip42
Thank you for replying. The narration and the dialogue are not a big problem. The narration is fine even if you did it the other way you mentioned. And although putting the dialogue in brackets is a bit unusual it didn't bother me much once i got used to it. My main concern is still the plot. For example, you introduce a new character yet we don't actually get to know who this character is or why he/she ist important. The "Persona 5 plotline" was especially confusing for me.
- Flip421yrPosted
Wouldn't recommend the story for most people. Although the premise is really interesting, the execution is pretty horrible. You need a lot of knowledge about the source materials to understand what is going on. And even if you know some things you will still find your yourself wondering: "Wtf is going on!". The author uses multiple plot twists to advance the story, which feel kinda cheap and rushed and don't work for me at all. Overall a very confusing and disappointing read.
- Flip422yrCommented
One Hit Wonder
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"The difference between Mind's Eye (True) and Mind's Eye (Fake) lies in that the former is an ability that humans can obtain through accumulation of experience. The Fake version is superficially similar, but in fact represents a natural instinct that cannot be obtained regardless of effort or experience—even though experience can refine its accuracy." Source: typemoon wiki
"DON'T GET CLOSED TO ME!" The Stray screamed in panic as he attempted to attack Shirou by piercing him with his tentacles, but Shirou easily dodged all incoming tentacles with both [Mind's Eye (Fake)] and [Mind's Eye (True)].