Spreading the knowledge about haki will remove it's specialness. I think turning Zoro into something common or uninteresting will not be good. I hope you keep haki as their family signature technique.
Huh? Being young is the best time to move into another country. Children are more adaptable and more malleable. They can adapt faster to new language and culture.
I don't know whether some lines or paragraph are dialogues. Are they somehow internal dialogues? They are outside the quotation marks. It's kinda confusing sometimes.
Isn't it because of Tengen's barrier that's why curse energy is concentrated in Japan? Consequently, sorcerers are more common in Japan than in other parts of the world. Is that canon or just some fanon I've read somewhere?
I was expecting him to have ant-king level nen, and nen techniques plus fighting experience. Meh. And at least burn that hand so that it can't be re attached.😑