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  • Battler83
    Battler83an hour ago
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    I thought he only had lesser unity depends so he should only be able to automatically cancel out two star and below spells how is he canceling out a four star spell as a three-star individual

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    Battler836 days ago
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    a few things I'm still somewhat confused about the conversion of currency here because they've said there are silver and bronze coins as well but now they're treating gold coins basically like dollars I get that they are more than dollars in this case several examples to include this but the fact that they've said that billions of gold coins were flowing around among the upper echelons just leave me to more and more questions about this additionally I'm not a contract lawyer so I really have no experience in this area but these conditions seem kind of weird why would someone pay 300,000 gold coins for a property that would barely worth a hundred thousand I mean they're clearly isn't that much in terms of profit in it if it's a slums area I mean the main reason you would buy property in an area like that is because it would be cheap and by the standard of this world this doesn't sound cheap

  • Battler83
    Battler836 days ago
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    author I know I asked you this every few weeks and I really am not trying to be rude and doing so I'm just wondering is everything still okay I know you have other commitments to do and so on but is everything all right

  • Battler83
    Battler8312 days ago
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    thank you for getting back to me, I appreciate an author who engages with the readers. You have convinced me to give it another chance. Yes I have seen the stuff about him integrating other tribes and I like that part. I have to say though the dating sim aspect of this story annoys me, it feels out of place. Don't get me wrong a good monster dating sim is interesting, but I feel you are not doing much to play on the fact these are goblins. I am not saying to not humanize them as we have to see them as people for the sake of the story, but give them more of the qualities associated with goblins.

  • Battler83
    Battler8314 days ago
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    He's playing a very dangerous game here it's one thing if he sells then the equipment and they profit from it in the end but him taking the treasure all for himself would not be a great idea in terms of one his own moral philosophy that he's put forward and yes I get the idea that morality and mercantilism don't necessarily go hand in hand but in long-term business sense of this if they go in there after purchasing his equipment with for any price and then come out empty-handed from this it will leave a negative impression with them well they may not associate that negative impression with his company specifically it could leave a negative feedback as a result or at the very least no positive feedback or little positive feedback which is outside of his expectations and idea for him would be to potentially take most of the treasure for himself and then leave just enough for the people to make a decent enough profit so that they exclaim his company and then reinvest that profit back into purchasing from him or work on a commission system where they have to give back a certain percentage of whatever they find there to him in exchange for being able to use the equipment with the option to purchasing it afterwards at a reduced price and of course no money changing hands if nothing is found I feel that would be the most beneficial way for him in order to build up good faith which is one of the main things he wants here but taking everything for himself in this is not only negative in terms of the company's long-run development but more importantly not in character with his personality at least as far as it's been set up in the story so far

  • Battler83
    Battler8315 days ago
    Posted

    Around 10 chapters Honestly I'm a sucker for lit-rpgs so I gave this a shot, I have to say I got quickly disappointed. The author goes with the old trope of making our protagonist some sort of omni-competent super handsome character fitting in with the archetype of a protagonist who can never do any wrong and never makes any mistakes somehow thinking that's going to make him more relatable to the reader it doesn't. I appreciate the whole idea of being thrown into just a random situation and the cruel moral choices that a person has to make those are understandable in a story especially developing one but then it gets into this whole power and rating system that is given little to no explanation and then automatically just throwing in a multiversal conflict and whole sets of rules and deus ex machina are coming left and right I get the idea of the character trying to take advantage of the situation and I respect a protagonist who does that but I kind of was looking for something a little more on the mercantile side rather than just immediately trying to either rip people off or manipulate people and yes I understand that the real world doesn't work like that there are many people that try to hurt or scam others and there's nothing new about a manipulative protagonist and that in and of itself is not a bad thing but I kind of want to see the internal thoughts of the protagonist in order to find out what's happening here it's just I don't know it's jumping into many directions at once and I can't take it anymore it's both too much and too little to keep track of very little consistency background or really any interesting or compelling characters to follow rather than shallow archetypes of a servant or a master or a thug or random civilian there's nothing here really to keep me interested I have really no comments to the author as it seems to largely be an abandoned novel but to anyone looking to read this to just see what it is don't waste time or any sort of mental space on the series it's not worth it.

  • Battler83
    Battler8315 days ago
    Posted

    Around 40 chapters in I honestly had high hopes going to this story and it started out pretty good decent premise guy goes into a tribal society has to implement some degree of modern day thinking but he's not some sort of genius who automatically knows everything unlike a lot of other protagonists a pretty good start. Unfortunately it take the downturn shortly after the beginning you have first of all the goblin women basically all being supermodels I mean I can appreciate the idea of sexualizing goblins but at the same time the whole idea of them being goblins is that they are distinctly not human additionally as it goes on after the initial crisis in the story they start showing that not only do they have individual skills which is something you'd expect from a tribal society but then they go on to show that they are actually masters or prodigies even when compared to people in the outside world and I'm like how how did they reach this this is not on the level of a tribal society anymore this is on the level of like a fractured civilization and that is going against kind of the initial premise that the author was trying to set forth. The author introduces the demon King element into the plot line pretty much really early on after like the initial one or two crisis and they haven't really established themselves very much or even the outside world very much having really no interaction with the outside world in the protagonist is going oh I have an ominous feeling that we need to deal with this demon king figure even though they have no idea what really the history of this world is. I will go on and say that the novel is not bad, but it is not good either there are many other novels of the similar premise and have the whole goblin thing going on that do a better job or at least aim for more realistic goal point without trying to do everything if you really want something from the goblin archetype I can't say this is a bad choice but I honestly just can't give this series anymore thought because there's so many other things more interesting that are available author I wish you luck in the future but I recommend trying to solidify your storytelling base before expanding outward and try to get a hold of your character development than a much more straightforward manner. Good luck