it's a great story it shows that you do not want a basic plot or copy the original, that you really go out of your way to make an interesting story and plot with interesting character development. I really appreciate your work !
Thanks for not abandoning the story, I read the first one and liked it very much. There is just a slight overlook , you wrote "Lying increase to level 8" 2 times
I read it entirely on machine translation and it's very good, not like many others fiction where everything is ridiculous, the story somewhat respect the One Piece universe without the comedy.
The few firsts chapters were really good then it went downhill since then, very disappointed with how the story is turning... From a new world with a lot of things to discover to this, well maybe people enjoy it but I do not
i think it's weird for the MC to live in the same house as your wife and kid and only seeing them 3 times in 1 year just for the sake of learning ? It seems forced and unecessary. .