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Snopey19h ago
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got -> gave or had
After hearing Arad's explanation, Linda left him and went to scold Merlin for locking her up with him. Merlin did laugh and ask her if she had fun, and Linda replied that it felt better than she expected. That response, Merlin interpreted it as Arad got a decent explanation, but I'm not 100% sure.
The dragon's harem
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey19h ago
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four two -> two I haven't written two in so long it looked incorrect. it looks like I'm trying to say true in uwu
Right now, he had three incarnations instead of four two. Arad before had just two incarnations, which he could double using the constellation of Gemini. Those two were his human and draconic self, but now, a third persona was there, a Nymph.
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Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey19h ago
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"If you're weak, then we'll kill you right now!" think the first ! should be a , but for sure, it sounds really odd to hear kill you right and right now.
At that moment, several of Nyar's generals and powerful abominations noticed that the strange woman was AO, and they all lunged at her at once. "If you're weak! Then we'll kill you right and right now!" One of them screamed, and Nyar cried in the back.
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Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey110h ago
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start -> star
He didn't do any of that. The start collapsed, but it didn't explode. From the outside, it looked like it was sucked by something, and when Amaterasu looked, a blinding while mobius strip was all that remained floating in the void.
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Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey110h ago
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her -> it or diluted it for her,
When Arad filled her, Merlin stood, wiped her lips, and smiled. "This wine has a relaxing potion in it. It will help her calm down any stress, but won't affect her mentally. This is what I use when I want to focus on a single spell for a long time. But I diluted her, so it should be fine."
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Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey110h ago
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a tall skinny jug.
"Calm down a bit! You're too nervous for nothing." She then grabbed the carafe of water, took a sip of it, then grabbed Arad by the face, kissed him, and pushed all that wine into his mouth. As she let go, she smiled. "Now, give it to her. I mixed something interesting in it."
The dragon's harem
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey110h ago
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water -> wine though I've never heard of a carafe, so I'll have to look it up.
"Calm down a bit! You're too nervous for nothing." She then grabbed the carafe of water, took a sip of it, then grabbed Arad by the face, kissed him, and pushed all that wine into his mouth. As she let go, she smiled. "Now, give it to her. I mixed something interesting in it."
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Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey1a day ago
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he* is 40+
The mother woke up two hours later and was even able to walk a bit with the help of the maids. She was already old and past her nineties, it was a true miracle for her to once again walk the hallways of their mansion.
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Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey1a day ago
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still 90s is crazy since either her is 40+ and unmarried, she didn't have menopause until like 75-80 if he's only 16-20, or she took medication to allow her to get pregnant again in her 70s, and they accepted all the risk.
The mother woke up two hours later and was even able to walk a bit with the help of the maids. She was already old and past her nineties, it was a true miracle for her to once again walk the hallways of their mansion.
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Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
Snopey12d ago
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The -> She flinched
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Fantasy · Alen_Tanor