@ToxicShazam I want to reply directly to your coment, but I cant seem to find it. Anyway, he seems like that because this is honestly the first protagonist I’ve ever written. I didn’t want to make him seem emotionless, but at the same time I wanted him to feel like he has a breath if experience to call on. I honestly think I just need to strike a better balance in characterization, which I’m finding is my weakness in writing. But I’ll try to improve on it. Thanks for the coment.

This is sort of an optimistic review of what I hope the novel is seen as. I hope you all enjoy it as you read.

A lot of people will love it

I would honestly advice you to Spread your work out to other sites like royalroad (which has a patreo link directly on the chapters) and scribblehub. It will allow you to reach a wider audience and more people means more willing donations. And I honestly think this is one of the best fanfics/crossovers I’ve read