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so she's the great grandmother of the business family that's been looking for sunny. i guess it communicates through time as well as space.
just a world or just a word?
I have just binged all the chapters up to here. And even though it cost me quite a bit, I have to say, great work so far. The writing style and consistency are great. However, im a little annoyed at the development of basically resetting the story. I dont know if its because I read everything so far at once, but it feels like only a moment ago Rowan was going through this very same thing. Just when he wast starting to get powerful and did some damage to his father the view shifts and were back to weakling.
it was explained before be began the avatar of eve evolution. he either gets an incarnation from his bloodline source or puts world seeds into 33 worlds.
since when were the elders referred to as golden cranes?
I managed to read like 10 chapters before coming back and finding the story had been rewritten. I kinda preffered the old direction as I read all of Evans' story and wanted to continue with him but I can also see how sending a literal god straight into the start of the novel can make it hard to develop and for new readers to be invested.
The most nonsensical and stupid plot devices in novels pops up again.
just let frank wait for 3 months instead?
Since the protagonist is a fan of "online literature" as stated previously. How is he so oblivious to the amount of attention hes getting and the phenomenon hes creating. You can argue that he was cultivating and not noticed before but now???
i assume leonels and arnolds use of universal force as it was mentioned before it was rare. but theyve only seen arnolds.
wait then what was the finger flick in the strength exam? just his usual physical strength?
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this makes no sense. we are told hugo has been hidden from the world ever since he was 5. now theres a random dude who has deduced is accurate(as far as we know) about his personality. and he didnt know because of the killing, because he was already talking before the alteration. it just felt like a poor way to give exposition.
the leader of dark millennium for sure