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BookWorm313

BookWorm313

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Love reading web and light novels witht he occasional manga. Enjoy playing computer games as well. Basically every teenage boy hahaha

2017-10-05 JoinedSingapore
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3131mth
    Replied to heather_samson

    The size dynamics dont really make sense lol. They said she was bigger than the biggest wyvern which i guess must be pretty big. The trolls sizes also dont make too much sense. They should have givem a description of the base of each race cause it is causing an imbalance in body sizes which is very confusing. Hard to picture something when you have no relatable comparisons

    Ch 33 Memories of a Young Girl
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  • BookWorm313
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    Replied to Dimensionist

    The MC plot armor is too strong. This is to the point that i find that some of the other characters are doing illogical acts that does not make sense. For example in the early chapter, the fact that the MC says that he is the hero and helped kill the beast. No one doubts him at all and everyone accepts that he is the one without any proof. This is completely illogical of any human thinking. Even though this novel is meant to be comedic, but there should be some semblence of sanity from the other characters. Well it might just be personal preference, but even I enjoy reading comedic novels, but this is just a story with a complete lack of common sense. Some comedic novels like kuma kuma kuma bear does it a million times better. Its funny and yet does not have this nonsensical feel to it.

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    It's Lonely To Be Invincible
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  • BookWorm313
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    Posted

    As of Chapter 49 Writing Quality: 5/5 No visible mistakes were seen. (My english might not be the best so take it with a pinch of salt all you grammer nazis) Story Development: 5/5 A relatively light hearted story in my own opinion. This story has a theme seen by most light novel readers. However, the light heartedness of the story carries teally nicely despite there being a little gore in some areas. A relatively easy read. Character Design: 3/5 A typical aloof MC. There is nothing out of the ordinary about the MC so far. However, the MC stays true to his role and does not do anything out of character thus far. (OP and aloof MC). Not much is seen in the side characters as there is little to no depth in them. They feel very surface level (if you get what i mean). Updating Stability: 5/5 I jist binge all 48 chapters so i am assuming that this novel has daily releases. World Background: 3/5 A typical chinese fantasy theme as a world background. Nothing outstanding seen so far. Overall: 4.2/5 I would consider this a novel to pick up and run with. There seems to be alot of potential in this novel. However, this novel is fairly light hearted and not for those who enjoy grimdark. This novel can be considered more of a easy read type novel. The main issue with this novel (why it has a low score) is due to the lack of chapters which will be solved in the future. Will do a future review once there are more chapters

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    The Immortal's Wine Store
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  • BookWorm313
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    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 71 Boran's Apprenticeship Quest
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  • BookWorm313
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    Commented

    Donnell you shall be now crowned the king of cliff hangers. 3 consecutive chapters 馃槺馃槺馃槺

    Ch 134 Chain Quest: What are you doing here?
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Posted

    As of chapter 19 Writing Quality : 5/5 The overall writing quality of this novel is good thus far (little to no mistakes). Story Development : 4/5 There is not enough story development at this moment which is due to the lack of chapters. Character Design : 4/5 The novel is a basic MC type (monster evolution) ,but an interesting type of monster. There is already an introduction to 2 of the side characters. Not much is said so far on them. Stability of Update : 3/5 The lack of chapters and slow update speed made me give the novel a low score for update stability. World Background : 4/5 The world background is also lacking due to tge lack of chapters. Based of how the story is going i feel that the world background exploration will be slow and will open up massively once there is some form of civilisation found. Overall : 4/5 The novel so far is good and keeps the audiences attention. However, the lack of chapters will be the biggest factor to why this story will not be popular as of yet. Most novels end their introductory phase at around chapter 30-50 depending on how long their novel is expected to be. To be only at the introduction makes it hard for readers to want to keep up despite how interesting and good the story is so far. For people who do not mind the slow wait I would reccomend this novel to you. However, if you are a binge reader i reccommend you to come to this novel later when it hits higher numbers so you can binge read.

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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Commented

    馃槶馃槶馃槶 another cliff hanger ..... wwwwhhhyyyyyyyyyy

    Ch 133 Chain Quest: Monster Potion
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  • BookWorm313
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    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 1 Prologue: A New World is Release
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Commented

    ahhhhhh the cliff hanger. it hurts. it hurts so bad.

    Ch 132 Chain Quest: I don't have any choice
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 68 Types of magic
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 67 Nature spell and Eldrian
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 65 Handing in the event quest
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  • BookWorm313
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    Replied to Evil_For_the_WIN

    Most probably as he ranks up his skills levels. For example if he hits rank 3 as a mage, the skill points to rank up those spells would be alot higher as it starts as a rank 3 spell compared to a lower tier spell like shadow spike. Also based of how easy it seems for souta to rack up skill points, it does not seem that he will have an exceedingly large issue with skill levels. For him to do a basic quest that he can do easily at this point can garner him 1 skill point. If he chooses to farm and grind, the amount he can gain within a short period of time would be substantial enough for him to start maxing out his skills.

    Ch 128 Chain Quest: Elite Knights
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Replied to Evil_For_the_WIN

    there is a high probability that the skills level up are more exponential than linear. Based of the novel so far. It seems that every 10 levels, the skill upgrades itself substantially more than the past upgrades. However, there are skills that start of at higher ranks. This would enable the MC to continue to be stronger as long as he obtains the prerequisite of a higher mage level as it allows him to use more "evolved" spells. (in my own opinion)

    Ch 128 Chain Quest: Elite Knights
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  • BookWorm313
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    Commented

    loved the mini internal monologue at the end

    Ch 62 Exercise IRL and heading to Jen's
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 62 Exercise IRL and heading to Jen's
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Replied to Breuno

    thanks for clarifying

    Ch 60 Back to the town
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  • BookWorm313
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    there is an issue here. it was said that he used all his mana. every little bit to cast the fire/water tornado. and apparently after that he still has enough mana to cast rejuvanate. Doesnt add up.

    Ch 6 Affinities!
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  • BookWorm313
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    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Prologue: A New World is Release
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  • BookWorm313
    BookWorm3133mth
    Posted

    As of Chapter 38 Writing Quality: 4/5 Decent writing quality with some grammer mistakes here and there. This does not spoil the reading process at all. However, it is not perfect therefore a 4/5 rating. Story Development: 4/5 The progress of the story is pretty fluid so far. However, the meeting with his friend seemed abit rushed. Besides that the overall story progression is good. However, there feels like a few issues. For example in their first fight against the enemy. They said his friend teleported the group far away. However, the phrasing made it seem as if they got back to the mountain in no time. Besides that minir issue, the story was smooth. Character Design: 4/5 The character design for the main character is mediocre so far. He shows a sense of nostalgia but it can be seen as he is not giving a strong vibe that he is himself yet someone else (might be confusing) which he should based of how the character is played. However, the side character is amazing as the show of hardship and stress really comes through to you. Update Stability: 5/5 I do not know how fast and consistent the updates are. I am just assuming that the updates are perfect and daily. World Background: 4/5 Not much is known as the story is pretty short still. But a decent amount of information has been given. However, the power system seems one dimensional right now. As a somewhat wuxia story, there needs to be abilities or skills that enables the reader to visualise it. There also needs to be a form of crafting. Considering the titlte the MC has he should have all these bases covered. So i feel as if the world background is not fully out there yet. Overall: 4.2/5 A good novel so far. However, this novel has alot of potential to become a great one. It has certain key moments that can pull in the reader as well have well rounded characters overall. This is a great story for people to pick up if they are in for the long run. I would personally say the biggest issue with this novel is the lack of chapters so far. As more chapters come in I will come out with a new review. Good job so far with the novel 馃榿

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