The only thing I have a problem with is the excessively repetitive descriptions of the looks in her eyes or of her lips. "hint of wickedness, cold harsh light, deep, dark cruel, menacing, etcetera..." Good amount of secondary characters given character so they don't all blend together. MC has many hidden cards to pop out in order to face slap anyone who bothers her. ML is happy to just follow a long while not being submissive to her.